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aw poor draco i really did not imagine in that bad. Flint is an ass especialy since draco was still so young, what an jerk. Now Harry feels like crap because he had no idea and was blind and acting in a way that hurt him more. It was a very good chapter though i like Theo a bit more.

Now you've got me teary-eyed...very good work.

This was a very powerful chapter I was actually in tears. The last paragraph really struck a cord in me. I loved it.

ack, Harry, you're so dumb! ... Okay, so I finally forced myself to read it because i want to read the rest ;) lol. it wasn't quite as angsty as I expected. In fact, I thought it was kind of tame, lol. Maybe i'm just emotionally unavailable. *shrugs*. Anyway, now I get to read the rest! That makes me happy. And I will read the rest, once midterms are over and I'm off work! until the next enstallment...

MY GOD. this jsut gets better and better. : D CONTINUE SOON PLEASE!!

ooh, more more more!

(Tears streaming down face in broken silence...)

That is beyond brutal...

So utterly beyond...

Oh my God... DWAAAAACOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*huge assed squEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZe!!!!!!!!!*

Poor baby...

Make it better, please?

Please??

XD

That added a twist in the story. Now we know why Draco is acting like such a prick. I hope he can realize that Harry does really care for him. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next installment to the series. DN.

Wow. Like, OMG kind of wow. I haven't reviewed the past few of these (haha i can't remember if i have reviewed at all) but I must compliment you for a job, a masterpiece, well done. VERY skillful manipulation. Everything is coming together and emotion present is just, mindblowing. I really is. The plot isn't static, isn't routine or obvious or in any way, shape, or form complacent but dynamic and constantly evolving as are the characters. The characters...do not get me started...the introspection and portrayal...exquisite. Realistic. Not trite or cliche. Believable. This whole story sucks you in and brings you along for the ride, and not from just a spectator point of view. And your writing style is smooth and fluent, thank goodness. I prefer longer chapters, but the length is just right. So, pretty much, you've written an excellent piece of fanfiction that ranks as tied for first place in the HP domain. And its probably somewhere in the top ten or so of my favorites overall. FANTASTIC EXCELLENT MARVELOUS STUPENDOUS AMAZING STUNNING TREMENDOUS BEAUTIFUL JOB!!! I can't think of any more compliments to lavish on you, but this story really is deep and interesting and it grabs your attention and I am touched. I really am. And I appreciate the effort gone into this story. Kudos for the emotions you can inspire with a few simple words.

so so so so so eloquent and beautiful and heartbreaking!! Flint that sick bastard, really! I hate him, always have... so update soooon! I can't wait.