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February 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 4
Good chapter. I like the slow building of their relationship. Harry and Snape, I mean. Will the fact that Harry saved Ginny's life have any effect on Ron's attitude toward Harry? Even more importantly, has Harry learned his lesson about rushing blindly into danger?!
A few corrections:
"He read for a while and felt confidant. . . ." Confident.
"'Where have your mind been Mr Potter?!. . . .'" Where has your mind been.
"' . . . Miss Weasley had been hysteric after waking. . . .'" Hysterical.
Eagerly looking forward to the next update!
Good chapter. I like the slow building of their relationship. Harry and Snape, I mean. Will the fact that Harry saved Ginny's life have any effect on Ron's attitude toward Harry? Even more importantly, has Harry learned his lesson about rushing blindly into danger?!
A few corrections:
"He read for a while and felt confidant. . . ." Confident.
"'Where have your mind been Mr Potter?!. . . .'" Where has your mind been.
"' . . . Miss Weasley had been hysteric after waking. . . .'" Hysterical.
Eagerly looking forward to the next update!
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February 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I think I remembered reading this before but no matter. I have no probs reading it again, it's rly good. First chapter has me excited for more. Wondering how. Sev will handle Harry.
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February 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Loving it! My sister thinks I'm crazy with all the loud laughter. I absolutely love Severus!!!! And I think the way you time skips without confusing me is awesome, not much writers have that talent. Anyway, onward I go!
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February 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love this. I rly do:)
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July 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ok I just wanted to say after just reading the first chapter I am more than impressed! This story is so far well written and I love that you keep it in a basic point of view. I also must commend you that if english isn't your first language you are very good at it, you are probably better at writing english than most people who speak english as a first language. Also great story.!!!!!!
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March 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Read your wonderful story and loved it! Now going to read the sequel and most if not all your other stories, I love Harry/Severus. They fit so well...both bad childhoods, unloved & uncared for, highly intelligent and loyal, wishing for a family to belong to but feeling it will never happen.
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March 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
FAN!~
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December 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
First off, I love this story. I'm in the Lifestyle myself and love to read stories that include it ;)
Second, I'm confused by a part of the story. You put 'History' in quotes as though it wasn't a history book he was reading? Am I interpretting that wrong? What was Harry reading that he didn't want to read in front of Severus?
Second, I'm confused by a part of the story. You put 'History' in quotes as though it wasn't a history book he was reading? Am I interpretting that wrong? What was Harry reading that he didn't want to read in front of Severus?
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June 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I wanted to say this is awesome so far, and instead of Lifestyle, you're Vanilla, and yes I happen to be in the Lifestyle. It's not bad, though not all the time does the sub decide things. You are correct with slaves having no say, but a normal submissive does have some say unless its total power exchange, then there is no safe word. A sub has to trust Master's decisions, but as said you've done great, i enjoy reading this
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December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! can't wait to read the sequel.
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