rate_review Reviews

personally i feel that you have a great beginning to what will be an exceptional story and though there are a few similarities i feel this story is intierly different from how severus spends his summer hols as i have also read that story but after a time it became to continuous and long so i stopped reading when the 100's were reached. i hope you continue to write you have my full support.

I don't know why you had to let everyone know that this fic wasn't supposed to be like How Severus Spends His Summer Hols, this fic is nothing like it. Your's is unique and set at a different time all together. You have a very good start here and I cant wait for the updates, and no matter which direction you take the fic, I doubt it'll ever be anything like the other fic (though that is a very good fic as well).
You had me cracking up when you had Harry follow Snape right up to the Head Table, and Harry's actions made alot of sense knowing the background you're having him come from. I can't wait to find out how you'll have Severus deal with Harry and how Harry will adjust to his new life. I really do hope that you'll continue. There really isn't enough fics like this to read.

Interesting fic. I would like to see this continued.

Ooo, you've sucked me in!
Another Chapter soon?
I want to see this develop!
*whine*

good start, go on. do you intend to write con fotations with his yearmates next?

Intriguing start. I'd like to read more. I concur that you should consentrate on their relationship and not go thourg every plot twist that are in HP books. There are just too many of those.

yes please contenue i enjoyed you story very much.

I love How Severus Spends His Summer Hols and I'm so glad that you started a similar fic.
Please continue writing this as I've searched for ages for more fics but I haven't been able to find any. I can't wait to see where you go with this.

Yes. Continue. Most definitely continue, by all means. Wrong as it is, this story is just right, and I really woud appreciate to read more of the same!

What a wonderful start! I really hope you are able to continue this. I am not much of a writer, so I don't think I would be of any help. But I will read any chapters that are posted ... and comment!