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February 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Sooo good.
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February 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad Harry told Snape how he feels! I like how snape would whisper that he loved Harry before he actually told him. That is so in character in this story. I also love how he puts Harry `s needs first. The whole relationship is so focused on each other. Just wonderful.
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February 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
and you left it there !!!!!!!! now Black knows that Sev loves Harry and hell is coming....why doesn't Sev know all that Dubbles is doing ?????? Thanks !!
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February 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story and can't wait for the next update. Thank you for a well-written tale with just enough spice and intrigue.
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February 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Awesome
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February 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great!! Again, the time skips were perfect. And even when u didn't go into much detail it was still easy to read and understand. I truly enjoy this story and I'm anxiously waiting for more updates. :)
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February 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
so far really good read !!!! hope to see more soon !
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February 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 5
Another good chapter. I'm glad that Harry is beginning to react sometimes like a normal kid, not a submissive. Severus will need to adjust his attitude and expectations, though. A parrot? Really?? I'm sad that apparently Hedwig doesn't exist in this fic. 😞
". . . It exited him somewhat.. . . ." Excited.
"'. . . He was the person holding your parents' location a secret via a spell called 'The Fiddelius Charm'.'" Fidelius.
". . . Although he had become somewhat accustomed to the fact that Master Severus now paid for everything he needed he still did not want to 'purge' on the man.. . ." Did you mean "splurge"?
Another good chapter. I'm glad that Harry is beginning to react sometimes like a normal kid, not a submissive. Severus will need to adjust his attitude and expectations, though. A parrot? Really?? I'm sad that apparently Hedwig doesn't exist in this fic. 😞
". . . It exited him somewhat.. . . ." Excited.
"'. . . He was the person holding your parents' location a secret via a spell called 'The Fiddelius Charm'.'" Fidelius.
". . . Although he had become somewhat accustomed to the fact that Master Severus now paid for everything he needed he still did not want to 'purge' on the man.. . ." Did you mean "splurge"?
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February 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
if harry trusted snape he would have talk to snape and got his help instead of putting him to sleep. i do not understand how snape is not more hurt by harrys actions. what is the point in punishing him if harry does not seem to understand what he did by putting snape to sleep and facing everything alone was wrong. he will just do it again.
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February 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 1 & 2
This is not at all what I was expecting - which is both a surprise and a relief, since otherwise I would not have read beyond the first chapter. As it is, I am quite intrigued by this story and plan to keep reading.
Since you asked for corrections:
"'If anyone push you, hit you, slap you, pull a wand out and curse, hex or charm you, you will come to me immediately.'"
It should be, "If anyone pushes you, hits you, slaps you, pulls out a wand and curses, hexes or charms you. . . ."
This is not at all what I was expecting - which is both a surprise and a relief, since otherwise I would not have read beyond the first chapter. As it is, I am quite intrigued by this story and plan to keep reading.
Since you asked for corrections:
"'If anyone push you, hit you, slap you, pull a wand out and curse, hex or charm you, you will come to me immediately.'"
It should be, "If anyone pushes you, hits you, slaps you, pulls out a wand and curses, hexes or charms you. . . ."