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For now I think a pre-relationship would be best.
Don't worry about your Grammar or spelling, you're doing great!
Lets see, I've never been in a lyfestyle relationship, but I do know a lot so I may be able to help...
In fact, why dont you just have co-betas?
More than one could help with certain facts on such relationships...
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Keep up the fantastic work!

You're doing great for English not being your first language, sweetie. Can't wait for more.

Another very well written chapter. I really like how it's developing. I like the idea of this fic concentrating on the pre-relationship part and a sequel concentrating more on the sexual aspect of the relationship. Keep up the marvelous work.

I really like this story thus far. Your grammer really isn't bad, if you hadn't said anything I would have never known... in fact I've seen much worse from people who have spoken english all their life...

Keep up the good work... and please continue updating. I would be very grateful.

Wow! Ok so I'm completely hooked! I think that you're doing a good job of not simply copying ideas from How Severus... Please keep it going :)

i JUST LOVE YOUR STORY ITS SO GOOD AND WELL WIRTEN{SP?] KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!

Wonderful chapter, lots of interesting stuff going on

Nicely done. You might not want to gloss over too much of his school years as there's a lot of relationship development and character as well. How is Draco going to fit into all this? You've really got a lot going here. Keep up the good work!!!

This story is excellent. I would like to know which students gave him the christmas presnets...even thought they were hardly anything gifts..Perhaps have harry from a slight friendship with neville? I would like to see some of the interactions in teh class..i mean what do teh students assume when they hear Harry call Snape "mater" i mean i know you said they think he's a tattle tale...but don't any of them pick up on that odd phrase. I'm glad that Harry went on teh adventure..it's showing that he's wanting to atleast prove himself...he's interacting with people other than snape and thats good. I can't wait for year two..Harry will tell Snape about teh parsletongue he's hearing wont he? and then maybe that can end diffrently. Will the polyjuice incident still happen? i would like to hear about Hermionies adventures as a cat, though i doubt Ron could pull of being int eh slytherine common room on his own without giving himself away. Anyway..please update soon.

I think this fic is rather good. I am surprised, though, that nothing was done to the Dursleys. They could have been brought up on all kinds of charges, whether by Wizards or Muggles, or both. Not even any "payback" by the wizards?