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excellent chapter. Vernon in really racking the points. I look forward to justice being served in the future. Can't wait till next chapter.

wow, this is a really great story. Your writing is verry good and sensible.
I like how you interpreted Serverus and Harry in the story and the whole original story-
I can

Oh please do not stop. This is one of the best stories I've read in a long time.

...o.o.... YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT THERE!! -.- meanie. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon! PLEASE! I BEG YOU!

Another magnificent chapter and most certainly entertaining. I love how you manage to include the important bits from each book. His fourth year is definitely going to be interesting to read. Keep up the magnificent work!!!!

get yourself a beta as
a) your grammar skills are unsatisfactory
b) you try to tell of a whole school year in one chapter and as a result get a crash, a mix, a crumble in place of a plotline

Great chapter

Ugh, I hate flamers. Most of them are just jealous of a persons writing skills and their original ideas. Don't let them get to you. You're an excellent writer and I suspect that if you focus your talent on an actual novel, you'd be able to publish without much difficulty.
Excellent chapter. You sped through Harry's third year while explaining the important parts. The fourth year should prove interesting with the Tri-wizard Tournament. Will Harry be a part of it, or will he be spared? Can't wait to read of the his punishment. I find that that has come to be my favorit part of the fic lol You're ideas are quite creative lol Cant wait for the next update. I'm just loving this fic.

^_^ Really liked this chapter. Nice job. Can't wait for more!

Nooo! Dont stop there! I want to know what the punishment is!