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That was GREAT!! I normally get so depressed with these kind of stories, where harry is abused at a young age, but this time I LOVED it! You did a wonderful job! Keep it up! I can't wait to see what serius has got to say abt. those two! heehee! of course it wont be much if sev. and harry have their way! ^_~

ugh! you stop it there?? how can you do this to me?? (note how I'm blatantly disregarding the fact that you don't even know me) anyways... please don't let sirius say anything that will hurt harry enough that they can't work through it! I loved this chapter, by the way.

Happy DANCE!!!! Such a good fic, please write more asap!!

Okay first of all eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee......I found a fic with a Dom/sub pairing involving two of my favorite pairings that's actually really good so yay, now second of all I just wanted to say I like how you have your time-line going in here and what I mean by that is how you don't beat around the bush but you don't go so fast that it seems rushed,hectic, or boring take your pick either, your a really good writer and I hope you continue this story till the end and update soon^^

*yes I know I make no sense*

I think, perhaps, you should start ignoring your reviewers altogether and just write this fic the way you want. If that includes spelling errors and grammer, so be it, as long as you enjoy what you're writing. You can always find a beta later. I find that when one does not enjoy their own writing, it shows. So I say, as long as you enjoy it, who cares what others think. If they don't like it, they can go write their own fic.
You had another excellent chapter. I felt bad for poor Harry, first with his punishment then being stampied. That had to of hurt. Then to discover the scar he will have to bare for life...I hope Snape will be able to find a spell to remove it, or that Poppy can do it.
I like how you're having him gradually stand up for himself. I'd imagine that the spell Snape cast will be quite the pain throughtout the school year lol. That should be interesting to read lol.
I'm really looking forward to the next chap, and remember, write it for yourself. ^_^

Interesting. I will continue reading this story.

This story goes pretty fast. Like how you mix the books with your owned ideas.

Your story is great. I like it how Harry slowly starts to trust Severus and even stands up for what he believes. It is very well written. Please continue.
Severus is very creative with punishment. I actually like stories with spanking in it as long as it isn't too bad. This seems O.K. and it is working already. But as Severus is doing it out of concern for Harry's safety, maybe he should reconsider the spell especially after Harrys reaction. Because when Harry disobeys him so recklessly he is already in a dangerous situation and not being recognised may be prudent. So when he gasps because of the spanking spell in a dangerous situation it might not be helpful. Maybe Snape should vary the spell or spank Harry himself.
Looking forward to more!

It was indeed an emotional chapter. I like how you wrote the quidditch world cup and made it last three days, lol. I really love how you are able to include so many details from the books and yet change them to suite the fic. I really can't wait to see what happens with the Triwizard Tournament. Keep up the superb work!!!!

Aww bless you xxx Poor Harry getting branded. Grr I really hate Vernon. Evil man, evil man! Well done on this chapter, the snuggling senes with Harry and Severus are too cute! xx I can't wait for the next chapter!