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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ah, a cliffie..are you going to show us the hallucinations? Will he remember that snape was there for him..or will it be just like when he was a kid at the dursleys? I mean he pulled through once..he can do it again..right?
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
story is great, and i seriously mean it. I hope you will continue to write it. i also hope that even/especialy if you leave us with cliffhanger, you'll update next day;>
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hi,
wow if I read your story I really like Harry Potter again. I must admit that I have stopped reading after the V Book and I only read fanfiction now. Your ff ist really great. I hope you update soon.
bye
harry-draco^.^
wow if I read your story I really like Harry Potter again. I must admit that I have stopped reading after the V Book and I only read fanfiction now. Your ff ist really great. I hope you update soon.
bye
harry-draco^.^
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... you've been busy. I've just read chapters 2 - 11 today. And I have to say... I LOVE IT!! Don't listen to people who criticize. If they're so perfect, let them write their own fics. This is a wonderful fic! Keep writting.
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, that's about how I imagined it.
Harry's gone on with Severus enough to not freak out a whole lot about the prophecy becuase he knows Severus would protect him.
Also, awww, for some reason that was the cutest self exploration ever.
You managed to make that a major point in the story without being overly graphic, nicely done.
Oh wait, I think you miss-spelled Vernon in the last bit.
Harry's gone on with Severus enough to not freak out a whole lot about the prophecy becuase he knows Severus would protect him.
Also, awww, for some reason that was the cutest self exploration ever.
You managed to make that a major point in the story without being overly graphic, nicely done.
Oh wait, I think you miss-spelled Vernon in the last bit.
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chap. Loved it. Very curious to know just what Snape had said to Umbridge to make her leave Harry alone. It had to of been real good to be so effective lol. Looking forward to the next chap. I cant wait to see just what will happen next. I absolutely have no idea now. Harry know's of the prophesy and that Voldemort is trying to get at him. Will he still be tricked to going to the ministry? If so, how? His occlumency seems to be pretty strong. Can't wait to find out lol. I seriously love this fic.
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope Draco doesn't tell his dad.
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww bless Harry for the last little thought. Hope Draco is going to keep mum about Harry and Snape's secret. I can't wait to read the next chapter! xxx
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love how you are making this your own fic. I really like how Snape put a stop to Harry's detention with Umbridge and that he told Harry about the prophecy rather than Dumbledore. I'm on edge for next chapter; keep up the very hard and magnificent work!!!
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter very much. Just one thing, I don't think Harry would slip up and call Voldi Voldemort. In canon he does it because everyone around him does call him that or You-Know-Who, and because he admires Dumbledore who calls him such. But in your story Harry grew up with Severus, who never calls Voldi anything but "the Dark Lord". Why would he slip up?
That aside, I think it is a great chapter. Please continue soon!
That aside, I think it is a great chapter. Please continue soon!