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October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would like, very much if you were to add me to any sort of update list that you have going. I am very enamoured with your story- and loged online three seperate times with my dail-up to read it through. I would greatly appreciate an update e-mail telling me your author name and the name of your story, so that I can find it once agian. .
Thank you very much.
borne_shadow_childe at yahoo dot com
Thank you very much.
borne_shadow_childe at yahoo dot com
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October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
fantastic chapter, i epecially loved the draco bit.
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October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't mind other's seeing my e-mail, that's fine. ^_^
I LOVED this chapter! Draco kissing Harry was a real eye-opener for Severus and how much he cared, wasn't it? *cheers* Can't wait for the next chapter!
I LOVED this chapter! Draco kissing Harry was a real eye-opener for Severus and how much he cared, wasn't it? *cheers* Can't wait for the next chapter!
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October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Adorable chapter; poor Harry!
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October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am very much enjoying this story. I normally don't read AU, and this is definitely that, but you've done a great job of making a very novel and interesting plot line. I am particularly enamored with the way you have portrayed snape and his growing love for harry.
You asked for advice earlier on and i would say my only advice would be to take things slow between harry and snape. I am gratified to see you are already doing that. Your readers will likely demand the snarry sooner than later, but you have to stay true to your vision and do what feels right. I would wait until 7th year to explore things (but again, it's your story.)
please don't make dumbledore more evil! my poor little heart can't take it! (sorry i'm a big AD fan) lol
To tell you how much i like this story, i normally don't like non-betaed fics with errors, but I seriously do not care about some errors here and there (and your writing has also improved I can see). You can edit later. Right now focus on your writing. And i do enjoy the frequent updates. Ignore bad reviews and flames...they are morons.
I know how hard it is to get a bad review. You think immediately, 'okay, what can i do to fix that, or make that person happy?' The best solution is to ignore those idiots and write to make yourself happy. One example is whether harry calls voldemort by his name. I mean it's your frickin story! (and i agree with your logic, btw)
One thing that really stands out for me is the idea of snape telling harry how to masturbate. that was awesome! and now i see you've added draco to mix which i think is an awesome idea to bring snapes and harry's feelings to the forefront. And i do hope you stick with the whole D/s theme when their sexual relationship develops as well.
anyway, you are doing fabulously and i look forward to more. I hope this story is lengthy. I realize you are speeding through years 1-5 (which i think is good!!) but i hope you slow down once you reach the snarry.
love it
You asked for advice earlier on and i would say my only advice would be to take things slow between harry and snape. I am gratified to see you are already doing that. Your readers will likely demand the snarry sooner than later, but you have to stay true to your vision and do what feels right. I would wait until 7th year to explore things (but again, it's your story.)
please don't make dumbledore more evil! my poor little heart can't take it! (sorry i'm a big AD fan) lol
To tell you how much i like this story, i normally don't like non-betaed fics with errors, but I seriously do not care about some errors here and there (and your writing has also improved I can see). You can edit later. Right now focus on your writing. And i do enjoy the frequent updates. Ignore bad reviews and flames...they are morons.
I know how hard it is to get a bad review. You think immediately, 'okay, what can i do to fix that, or make that person happy?' The best solution is to ignore those idiots and write to make yourself happy. One example is whether harry calls voldemort by his name. I mean it's your frickin story! (and i agree with your logic, btw)
One thing that really stands out for me is the idea of snape telling harry how to masturbate. that was awesome! and now i see you've added draco to mix which i think is an awesome idea to bring snapes and harry's feelings to the forefront. And i do hope you stick with the whole D/s theme when their sexual relationship develops as well.
anyway, you are doing fabulously and i look forward to more. I hope this story is lengthy. I realize you are speeding through years 1-5 (which i think is good!!) but i hope you slow down once you reach the snarry.
love it
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October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am really impressed with the speed of your updates. I notice that you sometimes apologise for the shortness of some chapters, but I can't tell you how much pleasure it is to come back a few days latter and find a wealth of new chapters.
On to the story. I love how you continue to deal with how Severus is helping Harry realise his sexuality, especially how you made 'greasy git' Professor Snape do the 'masturbation is normal and okay talk' - poor guy :P Severus' jealous and the Draco's triangle are also fascinating developments, I can't wait for the next few chapters.
On to the story. I love how you continue to deal with how Severus is helping Harry realise his sexuality, especially how you made 'greasy git' Professor Snape do the 'masturbation is normal and okay talk' - poor guy :P Severus' jealous and the Draco's triangle are also fascinating developments, I can't wait for the next few chapters.
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October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter again! Has Harry removed the mark or just inactivated it. I wonder what severus reaction will be? Will he be thankful for Harry helping him or/and furious with Harry that he was so reckless attempting to fight of Voldemort. Please update soon ! can't wait to know what happens next. I hope Sirius is not somehow getting custody of Harry!
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October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A cliffie! I'm I wrong, or do we have to wait until monday now until you update? Terrible! (Yes, I'm spoiled by your regular updates...) This was a really good chapter, I liked Sev's jealousy. Poor Draco though, what does he think about Harry avoiding him?
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October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, now we have to wait until monday for the next update, that is just too crule lol. Excellent chap. Love a jealous Snape lol. I really can't wait until those two get together lol. Poor Draco though, he kisses Harry and then the two can never be alone long enough to discuse it. I don't relish the thought of those two having a relationship, I'm too much of a Snape/Harry fan lol, but it does make sense that the two would start to feel something for each other, or really, that Draco would feel more for Harry as Harry is his only friend. Really looking forward to the next update, I cant wait to find out what happens next. Will Snape be mad/grateful that Harry once again indangered himself to help him? Can't wait to find out.
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October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another superb chapter. I would not mind receiving an email when you update; it doesn't bother me for other people to see my email. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Keep up the magnificent work!!!!