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How about Harry and Draco decide they are better as just friends? That way no one gets hurt.

No, not bad Draco.
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Poor Sev... I hate how much he's hurting, but it is vital to the plot.

no bastard draco please! let it be a mutual thing, maybe harry opens up to draco about his past. then they break up when draco realizes that harry loves severus. and he breaks up harry to make him happy, then he starts dating blaise.

Awesome chapter...I can't remember if I've reviewed or not o.o;; But I've been reading for a while nonetheless, and I have to say, please no bastard Draco!!!! Please! XD

Can't wait for the next chapter!

No not bad/evil Draco. Just more of ... uh ... conflict over expectations and intentions.

Noooooo! Poor Severus. Aww, I feel so sorry for him. It must be awful knowing that the one you love is taking pleasure from another, poor Sevvy.

Either way, please, no evil/bad Draco. I thinkit would just be too tramatizing for Harry. Not to mention Snape would probably effectively render Draco useless when it came to producing the next generation of the Malfoy family. No, if anything, you should make Harry suffer something tramatic and instinctivly go to Snape.

Maybe even have Harry kiss Snape looking for the kind of assurance he's experienced from Draco from someone he trusts completely. Then have Draco seen the entire thing and start making excuses for himself why Harry and he wouldn't work, and break things off gently by pushing Harry to Snape. Afterall, it would make Snape and Harry happy, and Draco could rationalize to himself that he would have never had a future with Harry anyway, what with heirs, and tradition, and Dracon not being the Dom that Harry would need.

Just, no bad Draco. It's bad enough when a person reads het fics and he's all evil, then you turn around and half the yaoi is all evil/overdominating Draco, and the rest is all Draco turning super evil if Harry goes to anyone else. There's never enough understanding Draco, and I would love to see this one turn out that way.

Then again, this is your creation. Please contiinue on the vein you are going with. I'm sure that any opinions wouild be taken into account, but the author is always the final word. Not to mention I believe the fic is already done considering the rate of updates...

None the less, I do greatly appreciate the fic and can't wait to continue reading until it's conclusion. Until then, keep typin'

Great chap, though I'm really feeling for Sev. Harry's supposed to be his! lol. So you want an opinion on what to do with Draco. Depends on which way he's going to be swayed really. Will he join his father and follow Voldy? Or will he stand behind Harry? I'm personally a little unsure at the moment. I kind of want a good Draco who just doesn't understand Harry's needs and what he's been through enough to give Harry what he deserves.
I also think that it'll be interesting to have a good Draco, but have him not want to disappoint his father, so he joins Voldy, thus making any relationship with Harry impossible.
But a relationship with Harry isn't going to last long either way while he's still on the fence about what side he'll choose.
I really want Sev and Harry to be together and I'm sure that however you decide to make it happen will be great. I'm really looking forward to the next chap. Cant wait until Harry realizes that its Sev that he really wants.

No! An evil Draco wouldn't be good. I think that a sexually frustrated Draco would be better. He wants more--Harry doesn't. He tries to manipulate Harry into giving him more and when that doesn't happen, he breaks it off. I'm really enjoying this story. I've read a number of Dom/sub Snarry stories and this one is definitely different. I like it and look forward to more.

Please, don't make this bad Draco! That's what all writers out there do, making Draco a villain so Harry can be with Severus. Why can't they break up and stay friends? It happens all the time in the real world. In fact, I would like a story in which they break up because Draco is to nice. They way you wrote Harry, there are several ways you could make them break up in the long run. One, Harry realizes he loves Severus and leaves Draco. Two, Draco can't be the 'master' Harry needs. Three, Draco isn't able to deal with Harrys issues in the long run. Four, Draco falls in love with someone else. Five, his mother wants him to marry a pureblood and he chooses duty over love. I just don't want to read just another Draco who hurts Harry because he is an unsuffarable prat, please!

Yes, bastard Draco who tries to use Harry so that Sevy gets pissed and then Draco get's taught a lesson and Harry realizes that he wants Sevy, not Draco! *litte hearts float about*