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Sev's birthday is the 9th of January.

very good technique! I'm sure you'll get a lot of reviews because you left us hanging! OMG! Please update soon! This is just getting so good! Oh, I'm sure you also have the next chapter under control. I have no idea when Snape's birthday is, but mabey you can find it somewhere online.

I don't think Draco is bad in this fic. It's not like he knew that Snape loves Harry and so, in his mind, he really isn't taking Harry away from Snape. Perhaps, just like you said, Harry needs to figure out what and who he really wants. I like this chapter by the way. It was really touching. ^_^
~Zega

First, I'm glad you decided to go this route (obviously!)
But nice twist having harry not be able to break up with draco right away. I think you should use that to your advantage to delay things with the snarry!

And you did decide to go with the whole covertly observed masturbation scene. Nice choice!

But here I would caution slow progression going forward, which is why having harry still technically be with draco is a good thing. This allows an ENTIRE summer for harry to mull over and likely agonize about severus's potential interest in him. I REALLY like the idea (which perhaps I over-read into...but i saw in your story and liked) is that Harry wonders why severus doesn't simply ask for sex if he wants it. Almost like his master would have a right to it if he wanted it. (This brings up the very interesting point that Harry STILL does NOT get it! very good

And therefore, once this whole draco affair is settled, I can see harry telling severus he wants him and severus not exactly believing him (even though he wants to!) primarily because sev will know that harry thinks he should have a right to demand it.
And then I can imagine Severus taking things very slowly with Harry, especially if you plan to start a D/s sexual relationship between them (which I highly keen on btw.....). Severus did seem to be into "testing" Harry's trust for him in earlier chapters with certain punishments (blindfold, etc). I could imagine him pursuing a similar line of trust exercises with harry before he were to pursue a sexual relationship. Just some ideas off the very top of my head.

good luck!

Ohhhh Yes a bad draco!!!

*raises hand for the bad Draco Scenario* would that ease the story more into a snarry?

oooh, things are heating up.

I argee with you though on using Draco to give Harry an expernice in aleratives out there. after all, if an person have only experniced only one type of relationship without real knowlege of other types, then how does that person know what is good for her/him?

I'm very curious to see what Harry Will do next.

This story is great!! And Snape's birthday is Jan. 9, I belive. I do know that it is in Jan. for certain.

Hey this story is pretty good!
Please write more soon as I am finding myself really hoping that Harry and Sev get together soon.

An excellent chapter. His birthday is Jan. 9th. I cannot wait to read the next chapter; poor Harry is so confused, I hope Draco doesn't get to angry when Harry breaks it off with him. Keep the astounding work!!!!!!!!

hmmmm, hard question. i'm not sure if i want evil draco, but i also don't know any other way around it. On the other side : next trauma for harry?, and what with theri friendship, they've got only each other so to speak -_- and for the things i REALLY want: harry to see that he is hurting snape and why, i want his understanding ;>>

ps: tnx for fast updates XDD