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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No, I didnt think you ended it too quickly, the main theme is about Snape & Harry.....I liked it! Very well done!
Waiting im...hnmmmm....Patiently! for more...sorta...:-) Kim
Waiting im...hnmmmm....Patiently! for more...sorta...:-) Kim
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am not sure which one delights me more: reading about Harry's awakening sexuality or read about Severus learning/struggling to cope it. I really like the way you wrote Severus and Draco. I love how Severus was so frustraed but adhered to his own moral code, but wasn't above buying leather pants that clearly are for his visual comfort as much as Harry's. And I like that you you didn't demonise Draco, because we know this is a snarry and we can afford to be generous :)
P/S: I like the idea of the necklace, but it did strike me that you could just add the locating/protective charms to the (also invisible) collar Harry wears, which is fitting with the traditional connotations of a collar ... "if lost, please return to Owner" :)
P/S: I like the idea of the necklace, but it did strike me that you could just add the locating/protective charms to the (also invisible) collar Harry wears, which is fitting with the traditional connotations of a collar ... "if lost, please return to Owner" :)
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like how that chapter turned out.
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter. I love how Harry told Draco so carefully and that they can remain friends. I cannot wait to read the next chapter!!!!!
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was really sweet! I can't wait to see how you finish and continue this story! Thanks for the update!
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what I think? well... how long until Sev and Harry find together? Please you are really mean in this point.
Well good chapter like always. Please update soon
bye
harry-draco^.^
Well good chapter like always. Please update soon
bye
harry-draco^.^
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story. Thanks for the quick updates.
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*huggles the author* ^________^ I'm so happy that Draco and Harry aren't in their "relationship" anymore! Now we can focus on Severus and Harry! *little hearts float about*
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Actualy, that's how I wanted it.
=3
Good job on that.
The dreams are really hot too, lol.
Um, I'm trying to review, but I can't think of anything to say that's constuctive.
LOL
=3
Good job on that.
The dreams are really hot too, lol.
Um, I'm trying to review, but I can't think of anything to say that's constuctive.
LOL
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought Harry's thought process was interesting and exactly what i thought it might be. That he thinks it is Severus's right to ask for sexual favors and if he doesn't it must mean he thinks harry is disgusting. Now i'm looking forward to the flip side...once this is all in the open, severus thinking that that the fact that harry thinks it's okay to ask for sexual favors as a sign that he doesn't really consent or isn't capable of consenting. Does that make sense? lol
It was a fast resolution with draco, but i don't think that's a bad thing. I mean this is a snarry...who cares about draco...let's be honest here.
oh and nice dream sequence!
Very nice chapter
It was a fast resolution with draco, but i don't think that's a bad thing. I mean this is a snarry...who cares about draco...let's be honest here.
oh and nice dream sequence!
Very nice chapter