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September 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great fic, I've really loved it.
I would like to read THE lemon between Harry and Severus at the end of the school year, but, well, it's great anyway.
I would like to read THE lemon between Harry and Severus at the end of the school year, but, well, it's great anyway.
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April 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Realy good writing!! What an enjoyable story. Some loose ends like Sirius' attitude when he finds out that Harry and Severus do have a sexual relationship or more personal interaction, sexual and otherwise between them, after all the build up. Still it was very good. Do it again please.
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April 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad story. The bill of rights and contract... I dont believe the capitalization issues shouldnt be done that way. We, as readers, ynderstand the dom and sub dynamic. Its not needed to be displayed in that fashion. It detracts from the story instead...
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March 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story. Kept me up all night it did. I'd actrually like to see a sequel to it. Their life after voldamort gone and the like.
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March 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thank you !!!! loved the ending !!!!!! thou I know it's not the end of it !!!!! just another begining ?!!?!?!?!?!!?
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March 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
If you write a sequel, I will read the hell out of it :) I loved the way you developed their characters so far, and would love to see how it develops now that Voldemort's gone and once Harry's out of school. Will he become a great potions master himself? Will they negotiate their first sexual encounter without awkwardness or revisited trauma?
But if this is where you leave it, thank you for this story. It's only because I loved it that I want to see more.
But if this is where you leave it, thank you for this story. It's only because I loved it that I want to see more.
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March 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That was hilarious with what Severus did to Vernon, Lucius would be the perfect master for him ^_^ and those dreams? Wow, completely hot and yummy. Please update chapter 18 soon.
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March 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
wow both of them having wet dreams !!!!!!!!! What Snape did to Vernon was awesome !!!! BTW the aunt deserved it also !! Draco was very understanding with all of it, glad that they are still friends !!! Thanks for the updates
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March 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
well what Harry saw really blow him mind away...wonder how Snape is going to do now and also Harry....and he really needs to tell Draco some thing too ...Thanks !!!!!
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March 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 14
Good chapter! Are we maybe getting close to seeing an expanded relationship begin between Harry and Snape? I really hope their mutual misconceptions don't continue too much longer, because that quickly gets boring.
I hope you don't mind if I point out a couple of errors:
" . . . His Masters' behavior was weighing heavily on his conscious. . . ." Should be "Master's" and "conscience."
Good chapter! Are we maybe getting close to seeing an expanded relationship begin between Harry and Snape? I really hope their mutual misconceptions don't continue too much longer, because that quickly gets boring.
I hope you don't mind if I point out a couple of errors:
" . . . His Masters' behavior was weighing heavily on his conscious. . . ." Should be "Master's" and "conscience."