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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww. good chappie. that was so nice to see Severus and Hermione find happiness and it was cool seeing Severus as a father and admitting he loved Hermione and couldn't get enough of her. I love those all encompassing love stories. It feeds the fantasies. lol. Love your story. thnaks so much for posting so quickly.
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really, really like the kids.
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know, it doesn't matter how many times I read this story, it just continues to hold me captivated. I absolutely love the children. They are very much their parents' children.
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just read the whole story. You are genius. I expected naive, inexperienced writing, and lots of gramatical errors (because that's what I usually get) but this story was far from that. In the beginning I didn't quite know what to think..but the story just kept getting better.
The sex scenes were so hot, and the last few chapters were really emotional. I love how you can make Severus cold and snarky but a bit fluffy too. Er that might not be the right word. I just got the image of a bunny rabbit with Snape's head. OK ok back to the review. Some parts of the story made me laugh out loud, there was one part in the early chapters...hmm I don't remember.
I was scared you had killed Severus!!
Good thing you didn't. *rubs hands together evilly*
Bah humbug Snape's trial was perfect, not like I would have noticised if you had made a mistake with any of that law BS.
The last part of chapter twenty was really sweet. Haha go Hermione for making him say it!
I think this is enough for me. Hopefully you'll continue writing great SS/HG stories after you're finished with this one.
-Cara
The sex scenes were so hot, and the last few chapters were really emotional. I love how you can make Severus cold and snarky but a bit fluffy too. Er that might not be the right word. I just got the image of a bunny rabbit with Snape's head. OK ok back to the review. Some parts of the story made me laugh out loud, there was one part in the early chapters...hmm I don't remember.
I was scared you had killed Severus!!
Good thing you didn't. *rubs hands together evilly*
Bah humbug Snape's trial was perfect, not like I would have noticised if you had made a mistake with any of that law BS.
The last part of chapter twenty was really sweet. Haha go Hermione for making him say it!
I think this is enough for me. Hopefully you'll continue writing great SS/HG stories after you're finished with this one.
-Cara
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i've loved every minute of it so
far and its kind of saddening to
think that this great ride is
coming to an end.
thank you so much for sharing this
with us.
by the way, great minds think
alike. i used Cerridwen as the
name of Snape's daughter in the
first fanfiction i wrote. for
much the same reason....
~blessings~
ldf
far and its kind of saddening to
think that this great ride is
coming to an end.
thank you so much for sharing this
with us.
by the way, great minds think
alike. i used Cerridwen as the
name of Snape's daughter in the
first fanfiction i wrote. for
much the same reason....
~blessings~
ldf
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes finaly. Hermione has her Severus. awwww I love it. And I love all the lemony goodness.and that was sooo sweet how Severus was finaly holding his son. and lol I can realate to how Hermione fet seeing Severus with their son. woooohoooo. good chappie and I am hanging in there to see the end. Update soon please.
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Fast pacd, action filled...
wow.
You epitomised Severus' and Hermione's relationsjhip perfectly, and I can't wait to read the final three chapters.
I especially like the way you avoided the "final battle", and instead focussed the story on Hermione and Severus rather than having it building up to that final battle, whih has become a major cliche in this fandom.
I'm in love
Sachy
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wow.
You epitomised Severus' and Hermione's relationsjhip perfectly, and I can't wait to read the final three chapters.
I especially like the way you avoided the "final battle", and instead focussed the story on Hermione and Severus rather than having it building up to that final battle, whih has become a major cliche in this fandom.
I'm in love
Sachy
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Waaaah!!! This is soo great!! X3 Hermione is so awesome! I love how you wrote this X3 When are you going to update next? I can't wait to see what happens when Hermione and Severus reunite X3
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent as always!! I am looking forward to the next chapter! :)
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome must find out what happens nest please keep writing.