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for The Heat's On Hold

by Samaelthekind

schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Once again I say I haven't ever really completely enjoyed moments where the pair are estranged and one is testing the other to open feelings up, but this was fantastic. I quite liked the scene in the classroom, although the Parseltongue bit surprised me. I enjoyed this section of the series. Wonderful job.
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooo good i've been waiting for that and i was not disappointed...*drool* i love the idea that Malfoys have been bread to respond to dark power..and What a way to respond!
person RabidSqurl
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor dears. Very good chapter again.
person Rhiannon Uerch Llewelyn
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bloody...

Buggering---

HELL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(Grovels in speechless worship. Sets up shrine & puts to good use stick of incence.)

Oh my bloody God fucked sideways...

Oi..

O__________________________o

person Alison
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man! What an awesome chapter!!! So Draco could sort of understand parseltongue? He just can't speak it? Interesting!

PLEASE update soon!!!
person Kasurii
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I do believe I've fallen in love with your writings, dear sir. I've taken to the habit of stalking the stories you've written through your profile whenever I have time, and I'm positively HOOKED on this one. I'm simply elated to see an at least decent writer on AFF; not to say I've never seen one before, but you do take the cake. I happily look forward to the further installments in this series, and rest assured, you've probably written your way into a stalker of a sort. ^ ^
person mphoenix
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
out of this whole chapter i feel sorry for harry. i can't help it. update soon.
person Anon
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! this story is fantastic! great job!
person Elric Maxwell
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm, what an interesting turn of events!! XD Wow, I can't wait to see what you're gonna present next! EM
person Anon
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay! more more more!