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by blackpaddy

person bthatcher2002
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ron and hermonie didn't sound very broken up about how they treated harry.i would like to see some thoughts of draco's to see how he feels about what he did.i am really mad at his supposed best friends.now they need him to save their asses so now they want forgiveness.malfoy,weasley,and granger all hate each other right so how in the hell did they all get together to hurt harry like that.i thought the whipping was bad but to let malfoy rape their best friend,that's unforgiveable.i can't wait to see how this story turns out.hurry with the next chapter.
person Bookworm51485
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so Draco rapes Harry but they're going to end up together? Seriously? That is so ridiculous it's not even funny. Not only that but the fact that it seems like it's common knowledge what they did (or at least that they did something bad) to him, but they just moved on with their lives like nothing happened. Hmmm...well you seem to write well and there's nothing wrong with your grammar and spelling. So I'd say good job with that, but my main thought right now is that I really wonder if you realize how absurd it is for a rape victim to end up with/marrying/dating/together with their rapist (unless it's a very dysfunctional, very unhealthy relationship). I've seen too many stories where people go this route and it just makes me shake my head every time.
person anon
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohh..you...how could you?! :( update soon! :)those people are really stupid if they think harry could forgive them just like that! good writing! ^_^
person mumimeanjudy
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would just like to point out that at no point in your story so far has Harry admitted that he was gay. The only reason that his friends turned on him was part of an overheard conversation and Draco Malfoy's actions. The actual rape would reveal more about Malfoy's orientation than Harry's.
person mphoenix
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update update update update update!!!! this story is very original!
person barb
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
still enjoying your story.can't wait for chapter 7 to see what draco has to say.that should be good.how does a person explain away rape.
person Draconayzia
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*hesddesk* *whiiiine*

Do I really have to explain those actions? I think not. THBT!
person Kat
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, I am just speechless, Draco rapes Harry and then when Harry mentions it, he gets sick and everyone is all like poor Draco, please don't mention that. Not even an apology, or anything. I am so surprised that Harry is taking the case, if Draco can rape him, then I would believe he could do it again, or harrass others, so I am not believing in his innocence at all. I want Hermione and Ron in particular to suffer, they can't just be all like, come back Harry, without having some consequences for their actions. What they all did was unforgiveable and just because they are all getting along, they seem to think that Harry should get over it. I hope that harry doesn't forgive them easily, or at all. Draco on the other hand, I want to suffer and be sorry, but I would like forgiveness. Anyway, just thought I would tell you I am enjoying your story.
person Nia
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW INTENSE REACTION FROM HERMIONE AND RON. WTF? Lol I was laughing so hard I doubt anyone would react that strongly. anyway good plot line but you might want to tone down thier reactions just a bit I can see tears disbelife and disgust but the sudden Violance was a bit much. GREAT story so far though!
person vibora
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! go harry!! you tell them! ^_^ update soon! long chaps are good! ;)