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by blackpaddy

schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is quite a dark little ficcy. But I like it. I can't wait to find out what Draco has to say. *threatens Draco with something sharp* Welp keep it up ^-^

Cassandra
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
....how can you just leave it like that!!! Ahhg Must know!!!! please update soon.
person Vibora
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
first of all-your fic is great =]
second-i'm not good at giving 'constructive' criticism...so i won't even try
third-for that different first chap you're thinking about doing: will you be replacing the original with the alternate? because i think the original is good and gives that strength to back up harry and the story but then again, at the end of this last chap there seems to be some kind of twist or something so if changing works for you and the story then that's ok....but even tough i cried with the original i liked that one just how it is
well that's all
update soon please! ^_^
person MrsFWolf
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a good story. I so want to hurt Harry's so called friends
person Newt
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my god!!!!

this story is bloody fantastic!!!!

you have to update this soon or i will hunt you down and make you write some more *gets torture kit ready* only kidding lol!!

please do update soon ^_^
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What happened? Sooo need chapter 8!!!
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just read this for the first time. I was like what?????? They rape him and nothings done? Really? The teachers? Dumbledore? Nobody? He could have them put in prison! Now, they want help? They asked Harry not to talk of rape in front of Draco? Do they remember who they are talking to? He was the one Draco raped! This all started because they thought he was gay. Now they know he was a virgin at the time and later married a WOMAN and has a child. Can they not connect the dots? Hello!!!!!!!!!! Yes, I want him with Draco. But, they seem to feel no remorse and they should. Big time. They only missed him when they started to lose at qudditch and knew they needed him for the war. It's like they think they did nothing wrong. Damnation! You have got to post soon. Because, though I don't see how their explanation of what happened 9 years ago is going to help, it should be a hell of a bullshit story!
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg more pleease!poor harry!
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Don't tell me they were like.....forced to do it or something?! Like they were under a spell...I still say fuck 'em. Hary has more important things to worry about than their guilt like his family and career. sorry....Im just REALLY upset right now about this whole situation. I hope they all leap off a cliff and that Harry and the baby laugh at them while they die. Okay I'm done :) nice fic so far! I love it!
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! i have soooooo missed you. i'm soooo glad that you finally updated. *dances a jig*. i love this story. PLEASE don't take so long to update this story again. thank you thank you thank you