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by ameliak777

person Barbara
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it, Hermione is the teacher and Severus is the willing pupil. Looking forward to Hermione's answer to the question.
person Kris
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I know whats cominnnnnnggg! Mwhahahahahaha! Cant wait for the next chapter!
person FLBanshee
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So how long are you going to keep us hanging? Talk about evil cliffhanger!!!!
person KelleysSweetpea
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet and wonderful. I love this story
person Anon
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is fantastic..though i'm going to be a bit nitpicky and say that the "confession" came about a bit quickly...not to say that it shoudln't have happend at this point of the story..but it was kind of the way you had him confess then say "well i want to do this with you" all seemed kind ofg..not beleiveable...just very rushed. if that makes sense..other than that scene the story is very well developed and an interesting read.
person Inspire
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for fixing the missing chapter. It makes the story much more cohesive. I like that you didn't overplay his first time.
person SnapesPet30
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story! Hope you update soon.
person Inspire
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story is quite enjoyable, but I think perhaps a chapter is missing regarding Hermione's presentation.
person Queen Celestia
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahh Hermione is being blind!!!
person Queen Celestia
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww a virgin Snape. I kinda want to write one. :)