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for Won't You Please Stay With Me?

by Mizzfreestyle

person qwerty
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cute chapter
person LM
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
is the word scent (even though it doesn't relate to change)
person Kalico
schedule September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a long over due chapter. Was worth it but then again I kinda forgot about it. But it's good that you updated and do intend to conclude.

PM

Is the word "scent"?
without the econd letter it is "sent"
with the first letter but without the second it is "cent".

This was easy since I'm doing Linguistics this semester but if this was not the word you meant then it would be good to know another word that fits this criteria.
person Soof
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy to see you updated, I've been checking every day. I absolutely loved this chapter! You have a unique beautiful style of writing which I can't really describe. I can't wait till the last chapter, so update soon!
person lae
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well, i definitely like the intro to your story...it sounds good. my gf has already read more of it and says she loves it so i'm just checking it out. like it though! good work so far!
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is a lovely story so far and I'm impatiently waiting on the next chapter.
person Medeusa
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent story, hehe. More please, lol.
person Hell
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gawd.. think you're the only one who would manage to keep my attention with this kind of fanfic *lol*
This is really far from what I usually read.. Usually I would find this too weird, and my mind still won't let me accept it somewhat, but you really manage to keep me reading XD
This type of creative fanfic.. would like to see more of it ^^ Hope you'll continue writing :3

Hell~~
person Ishy
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great! Please write more soon. I can't wait!
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay! an update!

it was great and really hot.

hopefully no Mpreg.....that's sorta freaky.