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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow for your first try at HP fanfic, it's really good ^^ i say you should continue
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am looking forward to more soon!! Good start! One thing though, you referred to Harry as Sirius' grandson.
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh do please continue! The heart wrenching sceans that can come out of a plot line like this will be well worth it!
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
continue, please. i would like to see where the story goes. :)
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
waaaaaaaa totally look forward to the next chapters.... a lovely start and u collected another fan waiting to read the rest
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good start. Can't wait to read more............Jet
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Hope you continue it.
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Promising beginning!
Engaged story with a lovely twist.
Hope to read more and soon.
Engaged story with a lovely twist.
Hope to read more and soon.
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
harry can probably understand how that cat felt when skunk Pepe Le Peou chased her in the loony toons cartoons
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your first fan fic, huh? I'd say you were doing very well so far, and you've definitely got me interested. I'd love for you to write more of this story; it has great potential!
You might want to do a quick spell and grammar check before posting, but otherwise, you write very well! If you'd like a beta (someone who helps you edit), I'd be more than willing to help out... just shoot me an email.
I hope you update soon because I'll definitely be looking for more!!!
~Aislinn
You might want to do a quick spell and grammar check before posting, but otherwise, you write very well! If you'd like a beta (someone who helps you edit), I'd be more than willing to help out... just shoot me an email.
I hope you update soon because I'll definitely be looking for more!!!
~Aislinn