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I cant wait to see whats gonna happen... Add soon.

A very nice chapter. I liked the ending a lot and how Harry is starting to vaguely cave in to Snape. Don't worry too much over the gliches, the story is still great. Keep up the wonderful work!!

A very nice fiction. Please continue and update as soon as possible. I am so looking forward to the interactions between Harry and Severus, to see how Harry begin to accept his man. I like the auroma of passion and dramatisation in this fition,please continue.

perfect length, perfect ending to a chapter, but u had better b quick about teh next one, lol, fab

Length is just right. In fact, I wouldn't have minded a bit more, but not if it takes too much longer to update. I like fast, quality updates. And I like your story. I'm curious as to why Snape suddenly wants to marry Harry. Also, why is he allowed to do what he's doing? How can he make Harry his fiancee without ever even asking him, let alone getting a yes? And what does the Ministry have to do with it?
So what is Harry going to do now? Is he still going to refuse to go along with the engagement? What about Snape? If he's planning on keeping a closer eye on Harry, is he going to try to make him move in like Dumbledore suggested? And what is up with Draco?

I love this story so far, but this second chapter was hard to read because of the odd symbols... Maybe they only show up that way on my computer?

Anyway, kudos. ^.^

what the hell is with the messed up type? its very hard to read!

AWESOME! I LOVE LOND CHAPPIES AND YOU UPDATED! YAY! KEEP ROCKIN'!

This is off to a great start. However, there seems to be a formatting problem. I'm not sure if it's just the browser I'm using or something like that, but starting with Chapter 2 quotes and apostrophes are coming out as other characters - most involving an upside-down exclamation point. It makes it hard to read, which is annoying because I like the story a lot.

Too Long? more like too short and it was begining to look good you know.
I liked it, i really like how its going but what happened to the "" It was getting confusing reading what they were saying and everything.
Keep up the great work.
Update soon.
Later.