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for Won't You Please Stay With Me?

by Mizzfreestyle

person glasswalker
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeez go on soon! Will Harry finally at leat TRY to be civil? What will Sev do? Is he going to do anything rash? *argh* Neeeeeed to knoooowww... *mewl*
person djiann
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just love your story so far. Please keep updating.
Thank you
person silent
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i feel sooo bad for snape... all he wants to do it get to know harry... and being how they were before all this messes everything up, i totally enjoy this story and look forward to reading the next chapter
person monika
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nooooo, please don;t drop it! I mean I really like it, and I want to find out what will happen next. :)
person fussbudget
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Snape out of it, Potter. I've barely touched you."

I noticed a little err... Freudian-slip-cum-typo at the end of the second chapter... Left me snickering (:
Enjoying this. More please!
person IshtarTenshi
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOO! I need more! please update soon!
person Sabrina
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GIVE ME MORE!
person Fin
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This chappter was great. I like it that Snape is so soft inside. Thanks for getting rit of strang simbols.Could you work a chapter in were Harry and Snape get into a argument about calling each other by there first names. Maybe you could make Snape try to befriend Hermoni to get information about Harry.
person celetialuna
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good start of story!
person celestialuna
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it, love it.