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great story can't wait for more!!! brilliant!!

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I am in love with this story! If I have to, I will check for updates everyday...

hey, i havent read your storie yet, but i just copyed and pasted it on my comp and ill read it later, if you really need a beta ill do it, i promise i wont change anything, if you like i can make sugjestions and correct the spelling and then ill let you change as u see fit, i dont wont to compramise any artistic anything ^ ^

i love your writing style. this is truely amazing. update soon.

Well, Snape was a little nicer at the end of this chapter so maybe Harry could start being civil as well and start trying to figure out why Snape is courting him, rather than jumping to conclusions. Whatever you do with this story though will turn out great, I'm sure. You've done an awfully good job so far, I've really enjoyed it. I just wish Harry hadn't been such a stubborn gryffindor, but he wouldn't be the Harry we all know and love if he wasn't at least slightly hostile towards Snape in the beginning.

this chapter was comicly funny. i'm sorry i can't thing of anything to help you write, but i love this story. i really like how you're writing it.

Well, have maybe Snape saying he needes help with potions, and asks Harry. Telling the boy it would be re payment for the clothes. Harry obviously will do it, becuase he would hate being indebt to anyone, or something like that. Hm what else...keeping him behind in potions classes and snogging him sensless of course Harry cant do anything about it, perhaps to his horror he wont want to do anything about it. after snapes kiss maybe hve someone else kissing him, and its clumsy and wrong, doesnt feel right, not like Snapes. thus he starts thinking about the man more, well thats all i can think of bye

Poor Harry. Maybe if Snape acts like a teenager...

i love this story ...please continue
diehard harry/snape shipper :) this is one of the best ones...
keep writing
emmalee