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for Won't You Please Stay With Me?

by Mizzfreestyle

person Jill
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I do want Harry to give in to Snape but not just yet. Perhaps have Harry not only resist Snape but also his feeling that he has for the man. Harry will miss out a lot og things in life that a young man should experence. Choices that are being taken away. There should be a lot of resentment towards Snape. Even as his feeling grow for the man so should his anger that he didn't have the chance to make that choice. You should be proud of your story. It's really very good. I look forward to the next chapter. thanks Jill
person Lina
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE MORE!!! MORE I SAY!!!!!!!
person Ravynsword
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have the feeling that Dumbledore's suggestion is to woo Harry. It will be interesting to see where you go with this. Looking forward to the next chapter.
person Lina
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! I LOVE IT!! Please let Harry hold out for a little bit longer!!!! And, i like possesive Snape!!!!!!! Don't let them join together right now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person K.C.
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like your fic^^ it's good... and I don't think you make Snape the villian... to me it seems he suffers because Harry is so mean and cold to him... but oh well... I just wanted to say that I like it and I hope you update soon^^
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's interesting.

Keep up the good work, coolsa.
person fyrefawkes
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It seems like Snape is always trying to win Harry through buying him things. Snape is sexy, so use that to win Harry over!
person DD Valentine
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooo!Thia is going so good!!I just love Professor Snape.He is so cool!I would faint if he were to wink at me!Dreamy!!Thanks for the update and I do think Dennis is a little too obssesed with Harry too.
person glasswalker
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Pleeeeeeez go on!!!!
I want to know if Harry finally sees the feelings and frustrations and at least gives in!
person Julia
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why isn't Harry asking any questions of Snape? I mean, doesn't he want to know why the man who is old enough to be his father, is his teacher, and has had nothing but contempt for him for six years suddenly wants to marry him? Doesn't he want to know why Snape never even asked him? Hell, he didn't even tell him, just had Sirius pass on the message. Why doesn't Harry just come out and say, 'no, I'm not going to marry you.' Okay, sure, Snape wouldn't accept that, but that shouldn't stop Harry from trying. If he doesn't want this, he should put it out there and demand Snape explain himself.