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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it please update soon !!
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October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The story has a wonderful storyline that has kept me glued to my seat. I look forward to reading more about how this story plays out.
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October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter! Severus is so sweet! I'd be all over a man that nice in a second, Harry doesn't deserve him. Of course I'm biased, so just update and all's good. Hope to see soon where this slow relationship is heading.
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October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like where you're going with this. I also very much like your style. Keep it up.
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October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! For Sev's sake, I hope Harry finally gets a clue. Poor Sev! ;D
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October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I love your story, it reminds me of me and a guy I'm with, me being the snape figure and him being the harry figure, except he is in love with me but very scared about it, since he and a girl friend just broke up and they were together for a long time, and he dosent want to be with me, but we can say I <3 you and we still are like we are together or something...but whatever, lol anyways the point is i love it keep writting, your very very good.
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October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your story, but please, get a beta. There are some spelling and grammar mistakes which make it really difficult to concentrate on the story (at least for me). For example, you write eager, instead eagerNESS, and you always write 'get'. Get what? I think you mean 'get out'. Why don't you write it then?
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October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful chapter!! I love all the emotion between them and how Harry is getting along better with Severus. Keep up the great work!!!!
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October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It is great that they are getting closer. I also like that they are like cat and dog. It is so good that you up date often
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October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwww sooo cooool!!!! can't wait for more!!! brilliant story!!!!