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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! I'm glad your gonna stop harry from giving snape a hard time.. I feel bad for the guy... Looking forward to the next chapter!
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh please update as soon as possible...I love it :D
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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good start.
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October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i liked this chapter! update soon please!
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, both Harry and Snape seem very OOC to me, but the plot is still enjoyable. I have to keep reminding myself that this isn't the Snape in the books and it's kinda neat to see him with a softer side, as you've written him. I found it a little surprising to see Harry warming up to Snape so easily, but I really liked when you had Snape winking at Harry and sending him gifts. It's quite an abundance of cuteness. :D Good job.
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Love your story. The way that Severus is trying to get Harry to fall for him, and Harry resisting him, at some point I feel bad for him but in others I can understand Harry's hesitance. Love the pase it's going too, I could already see Harry is starting to soften up to Severus a little.
Keep up the great job.
Please update soon.
Keep up the great job.
Please update soon.
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this fic. when i read it i can realy imagen the pictures with it. please update
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An update! Whoot! *does backflip*
I've been dying to read what happened next. I actually like this chapter alot. I love the idea of the 'Golden eyes' although I would have had Snape use it as a tool to possibly get Harry jealous because Snapes new 'eye color' could have made the young impressionable hormonally unbalanced teens at the school start fawning over him because of it and of course since we all know that once someone who we thought only has eyes for us, and repeatedly sought out our affections, but time after time being rejected, once they stop the affection and turn it towards someone else, that person who was getting it becomes completely jealous over not being that persons center of attention anymore whether they actually wanted the affection or not.
That would have been cool to read Harry getting bitten by the jealous bug cause girls and some guys around the school start fawning over "the professor with Golden Eyes" hey! that sounds like a book title or chapter title! HAHAHAHA! Snape should just make some golden eyes potion just for when Harry starts getting outta hand again. LOL! Could you imagine Ron's reaction if the "gold bug" hits Hermione and she starts fawning over Snape! temporarily that is...until Snape uses the eyedrops again once he's got Harry's attention.
*laughs as she imagines Snape getting love notes from other students and faculty both openly flirting with him in front of Harry...cackles maniacially*
Love the "Ghost" moment with the stirring of the cauldron...(the movie Ghost used a clay spinning wheel thingy and clay) The only thing that bothered me was the fact that Harry freaked out about how much it would cost to repay for the clothes. Harry has a shitload of money and he doesn't really care about how much things are and if he wanted to really get rid of the stuff no amount of money would have been too much for him if it meant getting back at Snape or paying a debt. Harry is not frivolous with his money at all but I'm sure he would invest in clothes that were for him anyway, and being responsible enough to want to pay for it no matter the cost instead of being indebted to someone like Snape. Anyway. Hope you update soon...like 4 chapters worth!!!! LOL! I love this story. Just write FASTER!!!
Take care, peace out! and HURRY UP! LOL!! *smiles*
I've been dying to read what happened next. I actually like this chapter alot. I love the idea of the 'Golden eyes' although I would have had Snape use it as a tool to possibly get Harry jealous because Snapes new 'eye color' could have made the young impressionable hormonally unbalanced teens at the school start fawning over him because of it and of course since we all know that once someone who we thought only has eyes for us, and repeatedly sought out our affections, but time after time being rejected, once they stop the affection and turn it towards someone else, that person who was getting it becomes completely jealous over not being that persons center of attention anymore whether they actually wanted the affection or not.
That would have been cool to read Harry getting bitten by the jealous bug cause girls and some guys around the school start fawning over "the professor with Golden Eyes" hey! that sounds like a book title or chapter title! HAHAHAHA! Snape should just make some golden eyes potion just for when Harry starts getting outta hand again. LOL! Could you imagine Ron's reaction if the "gold bug" hits Hermione and she starts fawning over Snape! temporarily that is...until Snape uses the eyedrops again once he's got Harry's attention.
*laughs as she imagines Snape getting love notes from other students and faculty both openly flirting with him in front of Harry...cackles maniacially*
Love the "Ghost" moment with the stirring of the cauldron...(the movie Ghost used a clay spinning wheel thingy and clay) The only thing that bothered me was the fact that Harry freaked out about how much it would cost to repay for the clothes. Harry has a shitload of money and he doesn't really care about how much things are and if he wanted to really get rid of the stuff no amount of money would have been too much for him if it meant getting back at Snape or paying a debt. Harry is not frivolous with his money at all but I'm sure he would invest in clothes that were for him anyway, and being responsible enough to want to pay for it no matter the cost instead of being indebted to someone like Snape. Anyway. Hope you update soon...like 4 chapters worth!!!! LOL! I love this story. Just write FASTER!!!
Take care, peace out! and HURRY UP! LOL!! *smiles*
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic, but hell i feel bad for snape. And doesn't that just perplex me... Though i like this more charming snape of yours...(very cool). I understand harry's angry, but i really feel bad for snape cause harry keeps putting him down. Hope the good stuff comes soon!
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That is pretty good, I enjoy the whole, Snape moving in on Harry and Harry being an ass, maybe you could give them more reasons to be closer together, along wtih making Harry lighten up a little bit more. Kind of wanting Harry to want more of Snapes touches. :)