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for Won't You Please Stay With Me?

by Mizzfreestyle

person joanne
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely love this story and can't wait for you to update and def. can't wait to see harry start to accept it and actually be with snape...oh well

keep it up i love it
person Julia
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm still not clear on how Snape was able to say "okay, I'm marrying Harry" and they were automatically engaged without getting any sort of consent from Harry himself. Also, Harry's falling for him awfully fast, isn't he? I mean, yes he's resisting, but internally you have him already leaning toward Snape. After so many years of animosity and mistrust, isn't that a bit too sudden? What's up with that? Is Harry ever going to explain that he wasn't really dating Cho? I love how Snape interfered and wouldn't let anyone else go with Harry to the dance. I wonder how much more of that he's going to do, and how much Harry will put up with. And what's with Draco? He's getting rude again. Is he in favor of Severus marrying Harry or not?
person Anon
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
will you update now?...or now?...or maybe, now?

i like the different take this story has on harry/severus

good job ;)
person glasswalker
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
and still there is a hunger for MOOOOORE!
I love the tentative steps Snape takes towards Harry so very experienced and sure of himself and knowing things.. that's just him. Brilliant.
person Kay_lupin
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please please update,
I really like this Story. thank you
person MeAndRossi
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay a new chapter. yay. hehehe its getting good, more soon please!!!

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person lemonade
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, this is interesting. Harry seems to be of two minds about being with Snape. Everyone else is kind of scary Stepford about encouraging them. Is there some sort of compulsion with him being legally engaged? And if there is... won't Harry be mightily pissed off to find out about it? Snape seem nice enough, but still a little Snapey with the sarcasm. Am wanting to find out more.
person maxie
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow!, more please
person LiT
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay another chapter. thanks for updating keep up the great work ^_^
person maria joao
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sooooo beautiful.....please continue :D