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for Won't You Please Stay With Me?

by Mizzfreestyle

person moony
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update...you're making me crazy without their first kiss
person Ckeeki
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yet another great chapter- Oooooh! How cute was Sev?!? And Horny Harry!! I'm so enjoying this, hurry up and update!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;D
person hera's child
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!! he said yes!

pretty good. hope to read some more soon.
person desperate contention
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hi, i just found this story, and i really liked it.
I know u said ur a bit unsure about betas, but i think u should get one, because they can make a good story great.
I really liked the plot and characterisations in ur story, but as a fangirl request, i know harry has just agreed to marry snape, but would it be possible to have harry still a bit unsure about marrying snape
I'm all for the happy endings, but i also really like the way u write harry when hes untrusting and somewhat scared around snape.
I like snape having to fight for harry, and harry fighting with himself, because he doesn't want to be with snape (when really, he does)
thanks
great story, please update
person hera's child
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
not too long and not too short....it's just right!
person anonymous
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story!! I cant wait to read more!! please update soon!
person april
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it.
person Luna2
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am lovin the story and Im glad Harry said yes *clap hands together is excitement* you know for a gift Harry could have given Snape the remains of the balisk from second year that he killed though it would be a little bit decomposed or how ever way you want to work it but whatever its just a thought. Anyway update asap
person emilie
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your storie is fabulous, please continue. I'm in a hurry to read what happen next.
person glasswalker
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
youe kept me from working - again.
go on writing so lovely stuff, That was SO CUTE! *happy*