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Ok, story is good, but Harry is acting a little "baby-ish". AND childish to boot. He knows how important things are with the Order and Voldie and I thought they had to be careful so Voldie wouldn't find out?

OMFG!! HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO ME?!!! XDDDDD so fucking close!! The sexual tension between them is enough to make me faint and hit my head on my keyboard. You posted after I replied! Thats so awesome! God I havent wanted two people to fuck that bad since Vegeta and Goku!! Someone help me, I swore I wouldnt get into harry potter fics like my crazy friend Chrystal!! Now look at me!! This is hopeless!! Why does yaoi have to be so fucking good when theres a dark evil guy? Vegeta, Muraki, Dee from petshop, Sesshomaru and Naraku! Curse you evil guys and your sexy lets fuck attitudes!! Please post more, I'm begging you from one writter/reader to another. I need it.


Harry and Snape slash is my new drug of choice



Prisma Kakkerra, Princess of all Saiyians

We-helll... Harry was being a bit of a tease there, wasn't he? I like that in a story, not all out smutsexsmutsmutsex, but love. It is a genuine story, sweet and serious and I love it. I truly cannot wait for more. Zega, O Zega, please hear my call! Update soon!

pleaaaaaaase continue...love your story so much...

you are really really mean...i shouldn't give you reviews until there are real kisses with tongues

Aw, it's so fluffy, I cannot wait for the misery to come in and ruin it all. :D Extremely good chapter and loved the few kissing scenes, so cute and fluffy, now bring on the misery and drama. :)

Another excellent chapter. This chapter was really sweet; I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the superb work!

Oh great esoteric wise author, giver of excellent fanfiction, my humble idea for a future chapter is to have Harry seriously injured doing something stupid, like leaping off his broom to catch the snitch, during a quidditch match while severus is watching.

Love love love, update really really soon.

Don't give up on us baby

OMFG!! That was so fucking funny!! First off, thank you for not making Harry and Snape so soft and ukish. Harry does hate Snape, and thats why I love the paring. lol. Seond, omg if you dont review, I'll just die! Weres the sexings!! Honeymoon?! And people keep interupting!! God its killing me!! You have to post the next chapter!!

Major flaw in your logic, if Snape, and all other witches and wizards, must marry before age 40 but why is the Ministry making Harry marry who is only 17 marry now? (If that is the case than all his class mates should be required to marry immediately too.) I can see Snape telling the Ministry he is purposing to someone else not on their list but not the Ministry automatically agreeing for that person. That is nothing but slavery. Also with all the family names dieing out Harry shouldn't have to lose his and automatically take Snape. Snape after all is a muggle name and Potter an old wizarding name. And sorry I don't see boy as being a substitute for love, even for Snape. I do like Harry's gradual warming up to Severus but he is still to submissive. Hope this help, Happy Holidays.