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for Won't You Please Stay With Me?

by Mizzfreestyle

person Rosei
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story. Very Romantic.
Thanks you for writing.
person maria joao
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loved it
person Anon
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loved the obvious confusion!
person Sabrina
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God I loved the scene in the commonroom! ^^ :D That was so good! All in all a good chapter. Can't wait for the next one (that hopefully won't take as long to be posted?). I can just imagin Snape's face if Ron and Hermione went to him and talked to him :P LOL!
person moony
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hello...finally a new chapter...but no pression there...kisses...only one,but it's a start
person ranni
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kawaii! So cute... Can't wait to see the next chapter!
person Sabrina
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update!
person Draven Wolfe
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sploosh!* (<---Is that even a word?! lol.)

Wow. That was an awesome chapter. But what's up with the rest of the damn school? >:O
The 'almost kissing' scenes were good...But I still can't wait for the ACTUAL first kiss. ;)

Hmm...That last comment...about 'enjoying the fluff while it lasts'....Well, that scared me quite a bit. >.<
What are you planning? XD
person Me
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is sooo sweet! The way Severus reacts when he see Cho and Harry!
person Jane
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Enjoy the fluff? Enjoy the fluff? What are you going to do to them? Evil evil writer. Don't hurt poor Sev and Harry...The last sentance was kind of odd, but then again maybe it was just me....But hey, I cant even spell sentence so...ignore me.