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for Won't You Please Stay With Me?

by Mizzfreestyle

person Solomon
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have read this story twice as well as your other story i love that Voldemort did not dominate either story I really enjoyed both stories even tho the other one is not complete please update soon
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha, so i was reading through the stories trying to see what i wanted to read and i saw this story and thought sweet, sounds good, familiar, but good, then i realized, i have you author alerted on fanfiction, thought i would just throw it out there that i heart this story very much
and i heart severus very much
ps, you are a very talented writer!
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Please write a sequel. I want to hear about Harry and Severus' children.
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah this was a very lovely end. This story has been the best I've read in a long time. I hope there is a sequel.
person kunitsu
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow chapter 19 is so sweet and the way you used the line 'Wont you please stay with me" was so perfect, I loved it. The chapters where Harry was trying to avoid and leave Severus made my heart clench with sadness. I am glad that they are back together again. Now I must read the rest of the story

Oh yeah the scenes where it seemed like Voldemort liked Severus in a romantic way made me smile cause I really like Voldemort with Harry or Severus or all three of them together. It put a really nice image in my mind ^__^
person kunitsu
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my those vows were really sweet and Harry's was really poetic, I loved them. Ok one more chapter to go
person kunitsu
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Overall this story was really nice and I loved it. I loved the way you concentrated on their relationship instead of the war. A sequel to this would definitely be very nice
person kunitau
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting 1st chapter. I am looking forward to reading the rest of this. *goes to read the rest*
person kunitsu
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2 review

Ok I said to myself that I would review this after I read it all but damn that scene where Severus kissed Harry on the cheek was a nice one. It seems that Harry has some feeling for Severus if he gets affected that way
person kunitsu
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooooooooooooooh I am so glad that Harry has accepted Severus as his husband to be. A blushing Severus would be sometrhing very nice to see