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Harry needs to be drawn and quartered...or spanked...or whipped..definitely punished in a very harsh manner for what he's done to Severus. What an idiot. I'm so angry at him that a part of me doesn't want to read anymore, yet if I don't, I'll never know how it ends. You are a cruel woman and I hope that you update really soon so that I don't have to be kept waiting.

Keep up the great work.

I have followed this story from the beginning I would love to read more so please update soon

I love this story! Shit Harry why have you done this??? hope sev will return in save. please update soon
lg daemonenbraut

Okay, I often read a bunch of stories and then review this was the last I read today and I liked it. Very much. Well done, but....

Could you please fix chapter 14 the spacing and paragraphs are off they all run together, makes for hard reading on that bit, but other then that and a few minor bits, VERY well done!

Hey!! Don't abandon this story!! PLEASE! Update, update, update!! This story is awesome and you have to finish it at least. It's just wrong to leave it like this.

Please, if you can find some time to please either add another chapter or make the final chapter if you feel you can't continue to update the story regularly. I beg of you please don't leave this story as is. It deserves an ending.

Thanks

"I would never cease to think about inflicting harm upon you.

Good Story so Far.

finally finished reading all 14 chapters. i can't wait to see how Harry will go bout putting off Sev, and how Sev will deal with it.
mainly i find how Harry kinda suddenly just becoming in love with Sev a bit strange. i know feelings develop'd but still a tad not quite smooth.
fairly interesting and good read so far, thumbs up~
looking forward to the next chapter. and i love long chapters like these.

I really like your story. Very good plot and everything. Keep it up!

I Love You for such a long chapter!!!! and updating!!! Whoot! *dances insanely in a circle* I love it, I still am amazed that such a phenomenally fantastic story comes from someone so young as yourself. Wow!

I sorta like the idea of Voldy having a crush or lusting after Severus. Sick but it's an angle that could work in favor of Severus. I wonder how Sevvie is gonna take the news about Harry wanting to break off the engagement. Probably not so well. Anyway, I enjoyed reading this chapter because it was sooo long. I think it would be better to have longer chapters since you don't update as frequently as us rabid story readers would like you to. But NO CLIFFIES!!! It would kill us to wait so long. *grins*

I'm in such a good mood, I think I'll read this chapter again! *dances manically around room*