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NO!!! *SMACKS HARRY* What in the world do you think you are doing, boy?!?!?

I do hope that next chapter comes quickly because I can't handle not knowing what fickle little Harry will do to mess things up even more...

WHAT THE HELL IS HARRY DOING *in howler mode* *in softer howler mode* great lenght of the chapter though. update SOON emphasing the keyword here is once again SOON *kisses*

Harry isn't the one being an idiot though. Everyone who is trying to force and rush him into marriage are idiots. This is just a bit too over the top.

I really love this story. I followed it from the very first chapter and this is why I feel the need to criticize the 4 (or so) last chapters. Harry's behavior and his continual refusal to marry Snape seem unnecessary, silly and childish. I know that you want to add some drama but it is very hard to understand and to sympathies with him since there is no real logic or a plausible explanation to his behavior. Moreover, it completely contradicts his previews behavior and the progress in his and Snape's relationship. He is portrayed as a pig- headed little boy who only runs away from his problem instead of facing them. Gryffindors suppose to be the brave ones. Why can't he just talk to Snape? The so called problem with the Dark Lord finding out can be resolved rather easily. It is getting more and more difficult to understand him and to like his character. I will say it again- I really love your story and that is why it is important for me to write this review (which I usually don't do).

OMFG -harry just fucking got on my nerves in this chapter-i mean come on he loves snape and yet he is going to take the easy way out because its to hard. well cry me a river and tell him to get over himself and tell the damn man how he feels-any way i still like the story and i hope u up date soon.

Okay, now that's just cruel leaving off at the end like that......I really like you story and can't wait for your next update.

can't wait to see more.
K.

Great chapter.. I had forgotten about this story.. anywyas.. for sex scene. Hell I like dark and dirty.. so realistic.. combined with idealistic in a way.

Realistic... Idealistic... who cares as long as it's HOT?!?!!! lol...

Thanks for the update. I hope it isn't too awfully long before the next one... I'm really enjoying this fic. :)

WOW GREAT STORY!!! .. it took you quite sometime to update but i'm really glad you did, i thought you have abandoned it and i've been looking forward to it really and it's a shame it'll take you longer to update next time but i guess art cnt be rushed right ^_~
as for the preference hmm, I've always prefered something sweet and fluffy but not too OOC that gives you tooth aches ^^.
OH! just a suggestion but i'm not really sure if it, good so please feel free to ignore it if you don't like it... why not make Harry Suffer a little like before he could tell Snape that he was wrong make Sevy say that he too wanted to talk to Harry about an annulment ^^, Harry will ba all broken hearted, Draco wanting to help tries to comfort harry and Albus being the medlesome old coot that he is distorts the friendship into something romantic in Sevy's eyes, making the potion's master jealous, then he becomes all possesive and aggressive that he literaly sweeps Harry of his feet and shows Harry Who he really belongs to... *thinks* geez i never thought i could be so cheesy... anyway ^^
BEST WISHES!!!! hope you create more fics as great such as this or even greater ^^