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for Won't You Please Stay With Me?

by Mizzfreestyle

person Ryan
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story..please update as fast as you can...
schedule July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I NEED MORE!!!
person tippi
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This last chapter (18) disappointed me, I was hoping that Snape did have feelings for Harry. Now I
schedule July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOOBLY GOO!

slaps Harry with slimy noodle! What? OOOH! I hope you make Snape get back at Harry bigtime! no easy forgiveness make him REAAALLLY work hard at getting Snape back. *slaps Harry with heavier slimy noodle*

Awesome chapter. Very clever.
I can't wait as usual for the next one!! Whoot! JUST ONE MORE TORTUROUS DAY FOR DEATHLY HALLOWS!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!
person Jan
schedule July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please Update soon ^_^
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this so far! i can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my... Oh No! Poor poor beloved Snape. He's so heartbroken.

^.^ Wonderful work of prose! Keep up the good work! Five out of Five Golden Stars for You!
Just make sure that poor Snape gets some love. Its so depressing seeing him pine and then deny himself the one thing he wants more than anything else. >.> <.<
person Jan
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Harry is getting on my every nerves. ARGH! He better not sign that contract.
Please update soon
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DAMN IT MAN!!! The stupid friggin Daily Moment of Downtime ate my damn review. I'm so pissed. I can't even remember most of what I said, but I'll try to recall some of it:

Harry's either crazy or a dumbass but either way he's frustrating the hell out of me. Snape's given him so many chances and he just won't bite. This is someone you love, do you want to lose him forever. It almost feels like Snape should just give up on him, except Snape loves him so it would make him miserable too. Maybe he needs someone to seriously talk some sense into him, someone like Sirius maybe. Someone who he'll take seriously, because he's obviously not listening to Hermione, Ron, or the twins. I swear it's driving me nuts. I can't imagine that someone could be so stupid without there being something maybe screwing with his head. Maybe that's what it is, something (someone) is screwing with his head. Either that or again, he's a dumbass.
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh mah goodness! Harry can't sign! You're torturing me leaving it there! *sob, pout*

Anyhoo, oh God, you need to finish the story. I started reading it just yesterday, and I love every bit of it. <3

xoxo,
MsCashew