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for Won't You Please Stay With Me?

by Mizzfreestyle

person Anon
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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person qwerty
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome ring. It's perfect of Sev.
update!
person kyusaiimaru
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I had to review again. Your writing his grand.

I love that ring. Its so adorable!
It would be cuter if it could talk but thats stretching it a little far. ^.^

Anyway, keep up the good work and take whatever break needed. Its well worth the wait.

xoxo
kyusaiimaru
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Squeals* I just finished reading all you chapters and have to say its really interesting and I cant wait to read more.. I especially adored Sevvies ring Harry got him! hehe

Ja ne
person cecilia-weasley
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sniffff. It's beautiful!
person Becky
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think it'd be more believable if you changed a few things. Cho is a year ahead of Harry and classes generally have two houses together, not three. So Cho wouldn't be in any of Harry's classes.

I like the premise, though. The adults are going about this all wrong.
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet! I really liked the chapter.
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, fun ring. :D *g*

You must continue. I love the story so far. :)
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i think the ring is perfect!! snape will love it.
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the little Dragon ring! SO cute! But Harry, wake up boy! You can't top Snape! It just wouldn't be right! Besides, it so much sexier the other way around...