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for Won't You Please Stay With Me?

by Mizzfreestyle

person KakashiSanzo5790
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Squeals*
god...I love this story so much!
I absolutely cannot wait to read more!
Please hurry and update soon!
I'm dying to read more.....especailly Harry and Snape's wedding.....and their wedding night..XD!
person ai-chan
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
your awesome!!
i love the passionate snape, his sucha hottie
curious
when after the voldemor fight, would you continue a little more about the after his fight?
even if i dont know how the ending would be, its always interesting to know what happens after the big battle
like, the story/life continues happily or not, even after a big battle
either way, i love it
shall be waiting for more!
oxoxo
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!

Nemesis ^_~
person Elfwyn
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far but one pet peeve is Harry's wedding clothes! Come on...he is a guy NOT A WOMAN! Just because it is two men getting married does not mean one of them must wear white and a dress and veil at that! He is not a crossdresser!
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehe...the latest chapter was funny! Fabio. I was rolling when i saw that name. Overall, I love the story and a girly Harry is not all that bad. ^_~
person PrinzessLita
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
plz update soon
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So... Harry is wearing a 'dress' and he doesn't even flinch... but he wants to be the 'top'?...
person VampiricNature
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that ring sounds amazing. I like the story so far, some parts I just wanted to hit Harry and tell him to stop being a morron. I can't wait till you update. ^_^ I'll be keeping my eye out.

~VampiricNature
person KuramaLover000
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok i think that harry was fine in that chapter-and please tell me that harry is going to be uke(bottom) on their wedding night. i just think if he was anything else that it would be really weird.
person Jan
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant idea with the dragon ring! I loved it!

When is Harry planning to give the ring to Severus?

What is Severus planning to do with Harry's ring?

Please update chapter 23 soon. *_*