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February 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I almost stopped reading this. Harry just made me so angry being a fuck-wad... I'm glad I stuck with it!
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September 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Not gonna lie, I really want to kill Harry. He's being completely stupid and pissing me off. His whole back and forth routine is irritating in the extreme. Yeah, I get that he has reservations but still, he's not thinking at all. But I digress, I shall continue in the hopes that everything works out
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September 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
Hmmm... I don't know whether I like it or not. (Maybe I shouldn't have written it down because you won't read it....) The idea is interesting.I like that Snape has to fight for Harry's love or acceptance. There are also some nice elements.
On the other hand, there are some facts that I really don't like, maybe irritate me. (I look this story as a real and thoughtful work of an author and not just a rough-and- ready scratch/scribble. Therefore, I am writing my review according to that.) I hate that Harry can't do anything just accept the fact that he has to marry with Snape. It's not a bad idea. It would be a nice twist in the story if you had put across it better. Without this explanation I only feel that it is a force.
My other problem is Snape's attitude. It drives me up the wall. Why does he have to cut Harry's sandwitch or pour him pumpkin juice (and everything what he did when they were eating (towel, sandwich, drink...brr). It isn't a nice gesture. I think Snape's behaviour is absolutely not romantic. It's too much. It's annoying. It's awkward and humiliating. For example, I would feel myself offended and aggrieved. I'm not a disabled person I can do it myself.
Another thing which is very disturbing for me. The price of the presents. Why are they so expensive and why do you have to emphasize it that they costed so much?
So, actually I can say that the summery is better than the whole story. However, I can also see that you can improve and you have any chance to become a better writer because you do have nice ideas.
By, Ren
Hmmm... I don't know whether I like it or not. (Maybe I shouldn't have written it down because you won't read it....) The idea is interesting.I like that Snape has to fight for Harry's love or acceptance. There are also some nice elements.
On the other hand, there are some facts that I really don't like, maybe irritate me. (I look this story as a real and thoughtful work of an author and not just a rough-and- ready scratch/scribble. Therefore, I am writing my review according to that.) I hate that Harry can't do anything just accept the fact that he has to marry with Snape. It's not a bad idea. It would be a nice twist in the story if you had put across it better. Without this explanation I only feel that it is a force.
My other problem is Snape's attitude. It drives me up the wall. Why does he have to cut Harry's sandwitch or pour him pumpkin juice (and everything what he did when they were eating (towel, sandwich, drink...brr). It isn't a nice gesture. I think Snape's behaviour is absolutely not romantic. It's too much. It's annoying. It's awkward and humiliating. For example, I would feel myself offended and aggrieved. I'm not a disabled person I can do it myself.
Another thing which is very disturbing for me. The price of the presents. Why are they so expensive and why do you have to emphasize it that they costed so much?
So, actually I can say that the summery is better than the whole story. However, I can also see that you can improve and you have any chance to become a better writer because you do have nice ideas.
By, Ren
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September 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just read this fic from beginning to end. I Loved it. Drama, betrayel, love, hate. Loved it. I wish and hope that you finish it but I love it anyways.
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February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story.
I loved the twists and turns. Also the way you made the characters adapt to eachother.
I would realy love to see a sequal to this story! Will be waiting for one!
I loved the twists and turns. Also the way you made the characters adapt to eachother.
I would realy love to see a sequal to this story! Will be waiting for one!
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January 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry but Harry is far too easy. Imagine yourself forced to marry your most hated twenty years older teacher. I WOULD LOVE THIS FIC if Harry and Snape were more... umm...realistic? Deeper? F--- this foreign language! Have you seen the BBC series version of Pride and Prejudice? The interaction between Ms. Elisabeth Bennet and Mr. Darcy (Colin Firth- The hero of the most sensual swim-alone-with-clothes-on moments in the history of tv drama ;p ) The only difference is much higher level of antipathy between Harry and Severus.
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March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! This was an amazingly wonderful Snarry fic. There were a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but the plot more than made up for it. The smut at the end was also really well done. The plot for this story was quite unique, despite being a 'Snape forces Harry into marriage' basis. I really enjoyed reading it. I started reading the Snape/Harry section starting from the back and working my way to more recent fics, so I do have a lot to compare it to!
Keep up the great writing!!
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Keep up the great writing!!
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March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Congradualtions on completing a story! *applause*
I enjoyed this fic and, while out of character for him, some of Severus' romantic lines were extremely moving. Puts me in mind of one of the main characters of Fushigi Yuugi, Tamahome, when he drops these zingers at Miaka and just makes me melt. (In the original Japanese voices with English subtitles. *swoon*) Tamahome's "I live for you." just slays me every time. Your Severus was just as swoonable. Words always have the power to turn me to mush. Great job.
I did have one problem; Harry's wedding garb looked too much like a woman's dress...veil and all. Was that really necessary? White is fine, he's a virgin, but a dress? He's still male, and I would've thought that he'd pitch a fit over that outfit. I also can't see our overly-dignified potions master crawling playfully on the floor in front of an audience of his peers. While a cute idea, I just don't see him doing it willfully. Overall, I loved the story and would encourage you to continue with a sequel. I know I'm not the only one who will read it. Thank you for sharing your obvious writing skills.
I enjoyed this fic and, while out of character for him, some of Severus' romantic lines were extremely moving. Puts me in mind of one of the main characters of Fushigi Yuugi, Tamahome, when he drops these zingers at Miaka and just makes me melt. (In the original Japanese voices with English subtitles. *swoon*) Tamahome's "I live for you." just slays me every time. Your Severus was just as swoonable. Words always have the power to turn me to mush. Great job.
I did have one problem; Harry's wedding garb looked too much like a woman's dress...veil and all. Was that really necessary? White is fine, he's a virgin, but a dress? He's still male, and I would've thought that he'd pitch a fit over that outfit. I also can't see our overly-dignified potions master crawling playfully on the floor in front of an audience of his peers. While a cute idea, I just don't see him doing it willfully. Overall, I loved the story and would encourage you to continue with a sequel. I know I'm not the only one who will read it. Thank you for sharing your obvious writing skills.
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August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't tell you how meny times this story made me laugh. oh my sides hurt!! I loved the ferrit part absolutely topical! You know fred and george are my favorit characters, but i really didnt like them on that date but i dont think that i was supose to he he. LOL sorry i'm in a odd Humor tonight. I really did enjoy your story.
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August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Angelus....so fitting for harry - means 'face of an angel'.... rather cute