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for Summer Heat

by Inell

person Anon
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm usually not a fan of the cruder words such as cunt or whore.. Perhaps I'm a bit of a prude, I do not know.
Regardless, this story was really erotic.. It was well written.. The characters were done well..

Quite the masterpiece, in fact.
person Anon
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
beautifully written
person ShadowFoxMC
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
5/5
Pretty solid story line. I loved the way you set it up, was slightly unexpected if you didn't know what you were reading. Definitely recommend it.
person innerchild
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
on a broom... damn. hot.. but sounds kind of painful and or difficult.

nice job