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oooooh more please, more!! :p

Chapters 1-2: May I add my entreaties to finish this yummy, salacious fic? I was Xanti1100 in your earlier reviews, but changed my name when I embarked on my 'Lucentious' career as an author. PLEASE add more chapters to this story. I very much want to read your characters' further adventures.

I started out with Lucius/OFC fics and I like them a lot. Yours has such potential. I hope you give us more of your 'world'.

LaBib

Fascination and frustration, indeed - I'm experiencing both. Fascination with lucious Lucius (as always) and frustration that there are only two chapters. Nice start - hope there's more coming. You have a strong and clear writing style, a "grabber" from the get-go.

Oh, I'm glad I finally made it on to the Lucius/OFC board - this is great! That Lucius isn't backwards in coming forwards, is he? Why isn't he ever hanging around any of my local dark alleys, I'd like to know. Like that image about her being the Snitch too.

Hi there, I actually read this story a while ago, and being rather shy, I never left a review. Sorry about that. But anyway, I just wanted to say I just love your story. I think you write wonderful dialog, and I really love your premise. I just have this vision of Lucius doing all kinds of fun and diabolical things to a breathless Catherine. Please keep writing on it. I would be ecstatic if you decided to continue on. I

Okay, now I'm dying to know, is Lusc, err, Lucius going to do something? Thanks for sharing, Pitt.

Heehee! I love it when they don't swoon and drop at Lucious Lucius' feet! I do hope the plot bunnies are well fed and hopping into more chapters!

Ooh, I like this sexy, villainous Lucius. So self-centered, so commanding, yet unable to control his own sex drive around an attractive woman. The Lucius we all know and love. One thing - you wanted rein instead of reign.

You're drawing out the tension very nicely. I can't wait for the lemons - the "oral, spank, and toys" sound promising too! Update please?

You have started a very interesting storyline. I especially like the dangerous, yet sensuous feeling you bring to Lucius. I hope you will complete this story. (Your mastery of the language and its punctuation alone would keep me reading.) I see that you have listed lemons, oral, spank, and toys, among other things. I hope this means you are planning to add to your story for us. I did notice that your other story "Lost - Year 1" hasn't been updated for a long time. Finish this one first. I like Lucius stories better than Snape ones (although I read plenty of both). 8-)

Thank you xanti. What a lovely review you have left me. Yes, I realize Lost has been left hanging. It is a monumental task that I have set for myself and takes up immense space on my hard drive - which crashed a few weeks after this site finally got up and running again. Thankfully my local guru was able to save it all! Thank the Goddess - at least my sanity remains [sometimes] intact for that one. I just have trouble deciding which incidents already written will go into which year -- they will mesh with happenings in all the books. I must be nuts! Anyway, back to lucious Lucius. Yes, a plot bunny with a few more chapters of the PWP is on the agenda for this next week or two. Hope you enjoy them. Thanks again and happy reading! MBS