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for Nasty in the showers

by devilfancy

person Fate-Angel
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn...that was really hot.
nicely done!
=^-^=
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, hotness. Hehe, you always have the snappiest endings. <3
person Riyo Black / Cold Lipstick
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
XD
........*Drools*..........
person Potter's Wifey
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love it.
person rebel_mistress
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
do you really have to ask? you know what we want!!!
hehe...
person Anon
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lol absolutely loved it. On behalf of the boys, I'd say yes, double or nothing next time.
person Vittani
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my god you cant leave it there. that was absoluely brilliant, i love the last line and how casual it was. please update soon.
person alyxanderson
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was terribly sexy
person Adela
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I feel obliged to be a bitch and point out a problem with your story.

The bet was that if Draco lost he was to kiss Harry's arse, not let Harry have his arse...
person devilfancy
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think if youll reread the first part you will see that the bet was the loser lets
the winner do ANYTHING he likes to the losers arse.