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September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just had to come back and read it again, because it's a wonderful fic and it always cheers me up :D You really did a good job!
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September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was the most HILARIOUS story I've ever read! Seriously! :-)
And it's sad because I haven't read a humorous H/D story in a LONG
time as of now. Yes, there are good stories, but NONE of them have
the sense of humor you've written here.
Very sad.
I wish you'd come back and show them how it's done.
And it's sad because I haven't read a humorous H/D story in a LONG
time as of now. Yes, there are good stories, but NONE of them have
the sense of humor you've written here.
Very sad.
I wish you'd come back and show them how it's done.
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March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ROFLMAO!*claps loudly and stands up* BRAVO DARLING! that was by far one of the funniest damn things that i have ever read and i have read A LOT! is there anyways i can talk you into letting me copy this, just on to my desk top so i can read it anytime i have a bad day? i swear that i will NEVER EVER give it to anyone else or try to pass it off as my own. please? you can send a reply to my email so i know.
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November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sweet and Funny
Great Work!
=^-^=
Great Work!
=^-^=
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July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was fun from beginning to end.
I love the entire thing, and the sex was hot. Thank you for giving me lots to think about.
I love the entire thing, and the sex was hot. Thank you for giving me lots to think about.
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July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear Gods! That is the funniest Harry Potter story I have every read.
I'm going to be giggling for days...
I'm going to be giggling for days...
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July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh, holy gods! this was fucking hilarious! and i mean
fucking hilarious. i laughed so much... i LOVED it!!!!
thanks for the brilliant piece of crack.
fucking great!
~blessings~
ldf
fucking hilarious. i laughed so much... i LOVED it!!!!
thanks for the brilliant piece of crack.
fucking great!
~blessings~
ldf
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July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!
Totally wonderful! You did an absolutely fantastic job writing this!
All very well done especially the humor ROFL!!!!
My favorite part was: "I can't believe you licked my lizard!!"
Still chuckling and laughing
Best Regards,
onyx
Totally wonderful! You did an absolutely fantastic job writing this!
All very well done especially the humor ROFL!!!!
My favorite part was: "I can't believe you licked my lizard!!"
Still chuckling and laughing
Best Regards,
onyx
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Amazing!
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October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just read the first paragraph or was it a sentence? I'm not sure I'm confused. Punctuation is your friend, use it wisely. You're story lacks basic structure and while it may have a good plot, many will never know. Why, you ask? How many people are there really willing to read a story where the first paragraph is structured like a poorly written sentence?
On another note, not every sentence needs to be on its own line. If you are going to capitalize something to suggest shouting you don't need nor should you use exclamation marks. Another mistake most people make: "HARRY!!!!" Ron shouted. (Not one of your sentences, just an example.) Capitalization indicates shouting as does the over usage of exclamation points, so it's not needed for you to tell us that it was shouted.
All in all, you should rewrite it or get a beta. It'll help improve your writing.
Nicole
MisstressNicole@hotmail.com
On another note, not every sentence needs to be on its own line. If you are going to capitalize something to suggest shouting you don't need nor should you use exclamation marks. Another mistake most people make: "HARRY!!!!" Ron shouted. (Not one of your sentences, just an example.) Capitalization indicates shouting as does the over usage of exclamation points, so it's not needed for you to tell us that it was shouted.
All in all, you should rewrite it or get a beta. It'll help improve your writing.
Nicole
MisstressNicole@hotmail.com