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Well that was awkward but lol at least she got something out of Draco. wow lol quite um saucy there. more please. Please update soon.

That was definitely one of the HOTTEST lemon scenes EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love how reluctant she was and how new it was for her, that was AMAZING. GREAT JOB can't wait for more!!

I love your story idea! It is really good. Man! Makes ya want more! Like... soon! Please update. I enjoyed it very much. just one question... Have you considered getting a Beta to help you with getting the paragraphs just so? It gets a little hard to follow when the sentence breaks onto anotehr paragraph in the middle of a word.

PLEASE don't take offense! I love your story.I want to see it become even better! You're doing great and a beta would just help to make it that much stronger.

Shiloh

man! it was awesome!! i loved ever second of it!

Please update!

hey i really like this story alot and i hope that u update real soon . i wanna knnow what happenns well ttyl

I wanted to check out your story b/c I enjoy DM/HG stories!

I like the tension you create between Malfoy and Hermione. The story starts off with a bang right away!

If I could offer some constructive criticism it would be this: There seems to be an awful lot of yelling and commotion in the library. First with Draco and Hermione, and then with Lenn attacking Hermione. Where is Madam Pince? On vacation? LOL

That aside, you put some GREAT descriptive passages in there! "His blue eyes frosted over" ohhhh I love that!

"Looking like a hippogriff has just had its way with you." Another AWESOME line!

Keep it up!

Best line of the chapter: Little Red was clinging onto Potter as if he was oxygen itself.

You're doing a great job!

Thanks!

ARGH!!!!! That just drives me to insanity! Unresolved Sexual Tension much? I mean, MY GOD!!! Talk about getting all worked up and then dropped like a hot potato! Those two are going to set Hogwarts on fire by the time they finally get together!

PLEASE Update soon! You are killing me!

Shiloh

Well I usually don