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for Shifting the Balance

by darkyasmin

person ShilohDarke
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! I hadn't seen the updates on this one lately, so when I found it, I had three chapters to read! Very nice!!! I love this story and am really looking forward to when the two of them give in to their desires! I know they want to! Please update soon!!!

Shiloh
person lisa
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh an update yay!!!!! Lol I want to throw my puter out too sometimes. and I saw the story Water and marked it but havent read it yet. going to though. Awesome chappies. I am so glad you updated. I can see them slowly starting to gravitate towards each other. He's soooo yummy even when he's being a bastard. I cant wait ofr more. more more more please. Update soon Please.
person MsChelle
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh please, oh please, oh please, oh please post the next chapter before I loose my mind!!!!!!
person iluv2dance
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!! So hot and awesome!! Please update really soon!!! Fucking awesome!
person allison
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was amazingly hot.
person prinlita
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your fic is so good. I just finished the most recent chapter, and the awkward ending between the two as they go further. Please update soon, and keep up the good writing. Love your fic!!!
person rachel
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great buildup, i cant wait to see what happens next...
person JAIDEN
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh this was great...plz add more
person Avanell
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I SOOO hope he's fighting his feelings inside...can't we have a peak? In his head, I mean. But more of their, er, actions together! And I don't mean fighting.
person MsChelle
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Yes! Yes! Finally. That was so good. I need more. Please give me more!