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for Shifting the Balance

by darkyasmin

person prinlita
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just finished chapter 14. SOOOOO Hot!!! The next one better be up soon. You seriuosly have written in my opinion the best hermione draco fic ever!!! Please more soon.
person anjellic
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sincerely intense....so minute and initimate in their touch yet so fantastically erotic! I can't wait for an update :O)
person GryffJr
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your story,really:-) it is very good written one and has this tension I can not even describe. I like how both Draco and Hermione communicate with each other , even without the words. Even when Draco is nasty bastard, he is a Sexy one. Love your story! Please update!
person tank
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very sexy! hermiones innocence is sinful! very good!
person TiffANY
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow!

You are most defiantly right

This chapter was so HOT

THANK YOU SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!

Any who why did you stop?!

I have to find out what happens

And I love when Draco said
person ShilohDarke
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ARGH!!!! What you doin'? trying to kill me? Damn! That chapter was hot!!! Oh gosh! And what a place to stop! PLEASE quit teasing us and let them have what they want! It's driving me crazy! Or... torment us all you want... I love the Sexual tension... Heck I write enough of it muself!

LOL! I look forward to getting to read the next chapter! Soon, I hope!

SD
person lisa
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ack!!!!! Evil cliffie. lol omg that was quite hot. Woot woot h more more more please. Please update soon.Lovely lemons stopped by evil cliffie .
person l
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is by far one of the best HG/DM stories i have read...its really enjoyable..it is a concept that has been done before but you have pulled it off so much better than most..i'm eagerly awaiting what will happen at the ball. I love the fighting turned into sexual frustration...i love that you have malfoy reacting as a teenage boy reacts..One thing that got me was they were going to use gryf and slytherine colors for the ball..wouldn't the other two houses be a little irritated at being left out...even though they are technically christmas colors?
person anjel lic
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I hadn't read your story yet and I just read what you have so far. It's wonderful...very full of angst. You're keeping the chracters very real and true to their original character. I love it...it pulls at you in so many ways. Please update soon! Happy Holidays
person aly
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update