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for Shifting the Balance

by darkyasmin

person Jayna
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just read the whole thing and i love it! i cant wait for the next chapter

Jayna
xxx
person Anon
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooh more please! Now now now now! Write!
person Jarrin
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap more! Please!!

In all seriousness, though. You are a great writer! I love that the characters have such real reactions. I can imagine myself saying much the same things. I noticed there are a few grammar and spelling errors (I'm something of a psycho when it comes to those two), but other than that, it's great! Please update soon!!!!
person Anon
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Quite possibly the best Draco/Hermione story I've ever read. I love how you wrote the last scene, where Draco tries to be in control but just can't resist whatever Hermione does to him. VERY HOT! lol Update soon!
person lisa
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woot woot!!! That was hot and sweet. Lol and she got to torture him without actually meaning to. I love it.Quite awkward though after the fact . Cant wait to see what the parchment said. Cant wait t o see what happens next.
person ShilohDarke
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS!!! Man, she drove him crazy! I can't wait to see him return the favor! ACK! I would have loved to be able to see him torment her some, just to return the favor... But I guess that is still to come. PLEASE update soon! I don't think I can wait for long!

SD
person jw021
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved the new chapter and I can't wait for you to update again.


P.S. I just have to say that I LOVE Out of the Silent Planet too! I'm glad you recommended it to other people. :)
person Secret
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Either this is Deja Vu or You have this story posted else where. I swear Ive read this before. omg its still great.
person TiffANY
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HOT!

SEXY!

UTTERLY AMAZING!

I loved it!

I cannot wait to read more

So feel very free!

I thought he was going to do 'something' to her as well

Guess I will just have to wait

You are so mean making me wait

You know you really are a brilliant writer and I hope no one tells you different

I love the descriptions

They are how the characters would really feel

Such passion, such intense passion

I really want to thank you for writing this beautiful story

Peace out and until next time my talented, talented, talented writer

Love TiffANY : )

: D
person sticky
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! When you mentioned the story Water, I went ahead and starting reading it. Its really good. I also like a story called Dance with the One That Brought You. Its a Draco/Hermione. Its a great story, too.