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for Shifting the Balance

by darkyasmin

person Donavon
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love all your stories. This chapter was a slow burning one which I think
will end up, (knowing your stories)very hot!!

Best wishes and blessings for the new year, to you and yours.

person maggie
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lovely new chapter, it will be interesting to see how Draco procedes to deal with his feelings.
person sticky
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whew! That was HOT! Very nicely done. Steamy just like you promised. And I'm reviewing just like I promised! Keep those chapters comin'; I can't get enough. I love all the drama and emotion conveyed in this story. It's almost TOO much! Almost. Well anyway, keep up the good work; I look forward to your next update. Sounds like it's gonna be very steamy! Please hurry! I'm already getting impatient...
person TiffANY
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness!

Thank you so much for those extremely sexy chapters

I mean wow

You did an amazing job, so congratulations

I cannot wait to read more

So update, update, update

Please?!

Peace out and until next time my talented, talented writer


Love TiffANY

: )

: D
person Jayna
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT! LOVED IT LOVED IT!! MORE SOON

Jayna
xxx
person Judith
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i luved it
person agussstina..
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely. Just lovely. can't stop reading!
I loved the way he says he hates her
and the way he says he hates loving her!
please update soon. :)

xox

agussstina..
person sticky
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gah! YOU'RE EVIL! How can you leave me hanging there like that!? I don't think I've taken the liberty of reviewing yet... or maybe I have. I'm not sure. Anyway, it's time I do. This a very good story even if you are EVIL for the cliffhanger in chapter 17. Ah well I'll get over it once you update. Hopefully it'll be soon! I can't wait to read your next chapter! I promise to review after every chapter. I know many authors love the feedback, especially when writers block (which is the Devil when you were on a roll before) decides to rear its ugly head! Well, until next time...
person anjellic
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next between Hermione and Draco...and how Draco deals with this situation :O)
person Maggie
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy your story and your style of writting, very nice. I can't wait to see more.

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