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Hey great story so far, I'm looking foreward to your next update, so far you are doing a wonderful job keeping everyone in character, I just hope it stays that way for a while. Keep it up, and I'll be watching for your next chapter.

Love it! I just want to read more.

Hi! i just wanted to say that I really like how you started this story. It'd be nice if you update soon...just a thought ;)

awesome first 2 chapters. I'm looking forward to your next update.

i love it already! update soon!

Great start. Nice save of Draco's ego/attitude there.... Now, I'm not going to comment on the couple of misspelt words (*cough*fuzzy not *cough* fussy) But I think that Head's are 7th years? It sounds like they are 5th or maybe 6th year? anyhoo.... great start, great clashing of personalities, and I am looking forward to reading the rest!

ok your story idea is a good one and I do like it, but I think you need to consult a beta before you post another chapter. Grabble is not a Harry Potter character, and your spelling and grammer leaves alot to be desired. It is difficult to read a story that isn't spaced out properly, or where you cannot tell when points of view end and start or when sentences start and finish. Once you get that fixed I think you will have a fabulous story.

Good Luck!