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for Shifting the Balance

by darkyasmin

person anon
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loving the story keep it up! Really like Draco's character in this story as he isn't all fluffy I love hermoine but confused and hormonal! Can't wait for the next chapter hope it is soon.
person lisa
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Hermione got a little of the violence she thought him capable of doing but it surely surprised her. and thats what happens when you push too far. She is lucky that's all he did. Draco is still delicious even whne he's a big prat. and uggg that last part was really hot. I guess fighting brings out their passion. lo. more more more please. Update soon please.
person tank
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
simply awesome!
person Loony Lovegood
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wheeeeeeeeee I love it! n_n
hehe what did Malfoy do to Lenn?and why? ;)
person Jada
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
luved it
person Lexy Malfoy
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great tention in this chapter. i love the part in the end where he almost slaps her.

looking forward to your next update.
person TiffANY
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You misspelled
person TiffANY
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can
person Avanell
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapter
person Anathema
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes, yes, yes! Lovely! And I must admit, I can't wait for the next chapter....I'm ready for Draco and Hermione to "collide" :)