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for Shifting the Balance

by darkyasmin

person Tootsie
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great great job!!. I love every love scene, think its so romantic+erotic+passionate. waiting you update soon.
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Probably one of the most realistic D/Hr fictions out there. There's no way these two can get together without working through all of the pretense, assumptions, anger, and obligations...good job...please update soon.
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Agh! Not nearly enough! Please write more!

Inspiration? http://i9.tinypic.com/435cbuw.jpg
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person Sekhmet
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic!!!!!! Update please?!
And maybe the title of the chapter could be "Consequences"?
person Lilum
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok....well, lots of pent up anger gets out for all too see.
So uh...you should totally keep up w/ the quick updates. Cuz uh...if not...I'll be very upset.
I won't do anything of course...but sit here and wait like the patient reader that I am. But I hope you don't make me wait too long. =P
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope to see that chappy today Please I love this story,
person JaynaM
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more soon

Jayna
xxx
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It doesn't suck! Actually, given the anger and frustration that Draco feels, it makes sense to me. There is someone he really wants, but because of the vows he has made, he can't have her. He's trying to do the right thing, not only for himself, but for her as well. I can understand, and the chapter made perfect sense to me. He needs to just come clean and tell her the truth. Perhaps if he was willing to take the chance, she would be able to help him!

Just a thought!

SD
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good Chapter, DJ... I enjoyed it. I love the fact that Hrmione will have her friends there to help ease her pain, and Draco, who is already seething will react even worse at this!

About Giggler... It is still in my head. I haven't abandoned it. But since I have been working on Mirror's Reflection, and Dare to Dance, it is kind of just waiting in the side-lines until I get the time to spend on it. Actually, I have been neglecting most of my writing lately, cause I have been working more hours than should be allowed at the job that pays the bills... (Only so much funtime can be allowed, you know)

Oh well! Write more on this soon, cause I really am looking forward to seeing Draco go through more hell!

SD