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for Of Butterflies in a Hurricane

by roxierose13

person Jan
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I can't believe Ron's dead! Why?

Let me tell you. You almost made me cry, on that scene with Harry and Mrs. Weasley. That really got to me, more so as a mother then as a reader, that's got to be really hard. And Poor Hermione, no longer has her love there with her. But I like the fact that she doesn't blame Harry for his death, nor hates him for withholding the truth of Draco.

Hope Draco is alright. And that he finds or Harry finds him soon.

Please update chapter 30 soon. ^_^
person tara
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
its a really good story.......cant wait to read more!
person bigkt
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm soooo happy to see new chapters to this great story. can't wait to see how this ends! x
person QueenB
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 29 Harry's confession was a little garbled (and certainly left out things). But I'm glad he came clean to Hermione. It's a bit late as far as Ron is concerned but at least she knows. She was, in fact, the best one to tell. No matter what she thinks about Ron, he would not have recovered from such news or taken it as well as she did.
person NightLo
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH~~~~~MERLIN....Ron is dead...I am so shocked about this!!! How will Harry explain Ron's death to the Weasleys?...I just feel too sad to think of any...

Maybe I will wait until this is finished to find it out...
person QueenB
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 25 Poor Dumbledore. Was he going senile? Unless he was in the habit of going through those books, I suppose he simply forgot all about that little vial.
person QueenB
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 26 Hmmm, that was puzzling. So there was a mysterious stranger spying on Voldemort and getting cryptic conversations in English and Latin. Snape was apparently already dissatisfied with service to Voldemort (something that may surprise Harry if he ever figures it out) and the spy was killed and his memory taken by another mysterious stranger. Shoot, this makes no sense.

I'm sorry about Seamus. I wonder if he was the guy Blaise killed...
person QueenB
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 27 Ah, yes, Poe is delightfully creepy, isn't he? I actually thought that they would need some kind of blood sacrifice. I'm wondering what kind of promise is wanted.
person QueenB
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 28 I had known that this sort of sacrifice would be needed...what other exchange would someone like Voldemort ask for? I know some people don't like Ron. But I always felt he was a wonderful pal to Harry, the jocular, fun-loving, strong friend all of us could wish for. It is terrible that Harry had to lose him; perhaps he'll understand how terrible vengeance can be and the price that it extracts from people.
person Kendra
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow.
This chapter was worth the wait. This was absolutely fabulous! Now I can't wait for more!!!